#therevenantsrpg

First of all, the graphics. It’s an interesting concept for the header - on one hand, it’s so simple - just text over an image, but the subtle gif overlay makes it look rather interesting, and it works! However, with that being said, the image itself lacks sharpness, and I think it would look wonderful with a psd over it that would give the image more brightness and contrast. I’m not really a fan of the follow/activity graphics, though - again, I’d like to see a brightening psd on top of them, and the text should be centered. I do enjoy your choice of theme, though - I feel like fansite-type themes for roleplays make it easier to view them.  The images on your character almost seem unedited as well while it would look much, much nicer if they had a unifying psd onto them or (if you don’t use photoshop), any type of coloring that would make them look similar. 

Now, onto the roleplay itself. I’m not a huge fan of using cisgender face claims for non-binary characters, I see this in a lot of roleplays today, and I don’t think people actually realize how toxic it might seem to actual nb/trans people. Why don’t you try introducing some other nb/trans faces instead? 

Now, onto the plot, there’s a few grammatical errors that strike out to me (and keep in mind i’m not English speaking myself, so my writing isn’t perfect either). “American” should be spelled with the capital letter, and it should say “affected” where you’ve written “affected”. The whole sentence that starts with “each resident who risen from the dead” just doesn’t seem right, either use a different conjugation of “rise” or insert “was” before it. “Bios” instead of “bio’s”. In short, I suggest you double-check all the texts (rules, descriptions, other “main” posts that people are going to read before joining your group) with a grammar tool such as grammarly or similar ones. If a roleplay expects their members to use proper grammar, they should make sure so is theirs. 

While I don’t do sci-fi roleplays myself, and I’m not familiar with the show you’re based on. I do think your roleplay has an interesting twist! Dividing the characters into dead and alive can be a very fruitful place of plot development - e.g. the “dead” being marginalized in the society, not being given the same rights as the others and so forth - it might be very interesting to play a character that goes through that kind of struggle, and it reverberates with the real life.