A bit more panels from what would've been the start of episode 6, just before the main friend group is hanging out in the Indou household. It's short and gives context that's explained later in the anime, but the part you'd miss if you only saw the anime so far is that Yoshiki is in the photography club!
Additionally, the scene where Asako saves Yuuki and learns that there are some nice spirits is different. They both are a bit older, here.
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Well Today i will finally post the first chapter, the prologue, to my other story that i will be working on, it will be On the Avatar fandom, not the air bender, the Blue people one.
anyways, here goes nothing hope you enjoy it and if you have any constructive criticism feel free to message me or send it to me in an ask.
âCpt. Lawrence and Dr. Hinsen, please report to my office as fast as possible.â
Christopher sighed and opened his eyes; this was supposed to be his free day. Well at least thatâs what the Colonel says, everyone knew free days arenât really a thing here.
Since he hadnât changed from his mandatory Morning Briefing, he only put on his jacket and stepped out of his room. Down the hall he bumped into Dr. Hinsen who was juggling stacks of documents, her bag, a cup of coffee and if memory serves correctly, she is about to ask Chris about her glasses.
âHave you seen my glasses?â she looks around her entrance hoping to see them before heading out.
Chris points to her head with a chuckle.
âOh goodness, thank you Cpt., Good morning to you!â She places her glasses on her nose and walks next to.
âOh, so its Cpt. Now, last night I remember it was a bit less professional.â Chris said with a sly smirk
âI donât know what you are talking about. As far as Iâm concerned last night didnât even happen.â She retorts, keeping her eyes forward.
âOh, I remember everything, do you want me to refresh your memory.â Chris straightens his back, getting ready to step into the colonels office.
Before she could say anything, else Chris opens the door stepping inside with Dr. Hinsen following behind him.
âDr. Hinsen, Maybe you should report to the nurse, you are looking a bit flushed.â
âSheâs Fine sir, last night was a long night for her thatâs all.â Chris smirks.
Juniper doesnât say anything instead she just places her documents on a nearby table.
âSir, Cpt. Lawrenceâs Avatar is ready for the link. We can move forward with the next step.â Juniper pushes her glasses, fixing them.
âPerfect timing Dr. I already have the Cpt.âs first assignment. You will accompany Dr. Augustine collecting samples in the alien world.â
âWith all due respect Colonel, if I have to work on my free day, I prefer to work with the soldier at the motor pool getting everything ready, where Iâm actually needed.â Chris protests.
âUnfortunately, Cpt. I wasnât asking. Be ready at 1200 hours.â Chris was going to protest but the door opened, interrupting him.
The Colonel looks up for the first time during this entire conversation.
âCorporal Sully, impeccable timing, you will be Joining the captain during tomorrows assignment, ill let him give the details. Now leave, and Christopher please stop teasing the scientist they are flustered enoughâ
Chris chuckles at the comment and Juniper grumbles.
All three of them Leave, Chris hasnât even bothered to look at the other guy.
âSully, where do I know that name.â He decides to look at the guy next to him but finds him on a wheelchair.
âJake sully?!â Chris says excitedly, Juniper looks very confused
âChristopher Lawrence?â
âIt you man, Holy shitâ Chris shakes his hand and lowers himself to hug him.
âDo you two know each other?â
âJake and I have done everything together, we enlisted at the same time, started our training together, we were put together everywhere, even in our deployment.â Chris says excitedly
âSo, you guys are War Buddies?â Juniper asks
âYou could say its something like thatâ Jake answers
âCome on, we gotta get to the lab, ill brief you on the way thereâ
A few minutes later they walked through the doors of the lab, the room was full of machines and tools that Chris was sure they needed but looked to complicated to be practical.
There were a few tanks nearby, giant blue human looking creatures floated in them, like a fetus. It was at the very least unsettling.
Chris then walked by one that looked exactly like him, of course it had Naâvi features, but it still looked exactly like him. Down to the faint scar on his right eye.
Jake was looking at his too.
âNo, we are not taking two trigger happy thugs down with us, it just isnât going to happenâ A woman argued from the other side of the lab. Apparently, someone wasnât too happy taking
âIs there a problem Dr?â Chris asked.
âHave any of you idiots ever worked in a lab?â She asked, irritated
âI dissected a frog once.â Jake answered
âIâm sorry, Iâm a little busy protecting your lab to work in it.â Chris says without a single feeling being expressed in his sentence.
âWell, thatâs great.â She throes her arms up and storms out of the lab.
âIâm taking this to corporate, Iâm tired of this shit!â
âBe here at 0800 tomorrow, weâll do the link up then.â Another scientist that had initially let us in the lab and was talking with Norm said. Letting us out of the lab.
âSee you later Juniâ Chris waves at Juniper who was already in her desk flipping through clipboards.
âGoodbye, Cpt.â
âYou know you guys could at least fake that you care about the nativesâ Norm Scoffs and is ignored by the pair.
A few hours later, Chris and Jake find themselves in the stations bar.
âWhy are you here Jake? What brought you to the middle of nowhere?â Chris leans back in his chair Looking for a reaction on jakeâs face but doesnât find one.
âTom died; they wanted me to take his place in the experiment.â
âAw man thatâs awful, I didnât know, I heard that someone on the scientist side died, I didnât know it was your brother.
âWell, it doesnât really matter, you couldnât have done much anyway.â Jake took a sip from his bottle.
âWhy are you here Chris, what happened to Monica, last time I saw you guys was at the wedding.â
âShe uh, she died, a few years later, she got lung and brain cancer, and they caught it a bit late, so you could say Iâm here looking for an escape.â Chris rubs his thumb on the ring that was still on his finger.
âIâm sorry man.â Jake pats Chris on the shoulder.
âHey, itâs all right, it was a long time ago, letâs not let the night get ruined.â Just as he said that Juni and Trudy walked into the Bar.
âHey, Over here.â Chris waves enthusiastically.
âYou know, you could have been a little nicer with Dr. Augustine earlier.â Juniper said before sitting next to them.
âAh, I was just having a bit of fun its just a matter of time, so she warms up to me.â Chris comments which make Jake choke on his beer.
âOh sure, because you are so likeable.â Trudy mocked, with a smirk
âTrudy, this is Jake Sully, heâs going to be joining us on the next assignmentâ
âPleasure to meet you jake.â She extends her hand and Jake takes it in his shaking it.
The night was light, and the group talked and laughed together, before heading to their rooms, tomorrow was going to be a long day after all.
I donât know if this is a widespread thing, but Iâve always struggled with having to make major changes to my plot, because I always want things just so. Here are some things Iâve learned along the way that make the process a little easier.Â
ALSO I AM CERTAINLY NOT AN EXPERT, THIS IS SIMPLY WHAT IâVE OBSERVED OVER MY WRITING JOURNEY!
1. Write what you want to read??? Yes!
The entire reason I started writing my novel was because I wanted to have a book with all of my favorite elements in it. However, I realized that I was constantly leaning into writing what I loved to write, i.e. lots of blood and gore, which is not what I love to read. I changed my style of writing, and adjusted my plot in order to create a story that I would love to read. If youâre not planning on publishing and are writing for pleasure, by all means, write whatever you want! But you must understand the distinction between writing what you want to read and what you want to write. Itâs hard to make that transition, but once you recognize the difference and think about where you want to take your book, real progress is made, in both your book and you and a writer.Â
2. Drastic changes are A-OKAY!
In the first drafts of my novel, here is my reaction to making any sort of change to the absolutes of my outline and plans:
I wanted specific tropes, specific names, and specific traits, and if I had to cut one of them out, I was certain my soul would leave me as an empty husk. But as I kept writing, I finally gave in and made certain changes. This trope had to go, and this character needed to be different in order for character development. When I gave in to those changes, I ended up with a story far different than the dreamland in my head, but it was definitely better, and FAR MORE COHESIVE. The story in my head was not born perfect, and it needed change to become my ideal, despite what I thought in the beginning.Â
3. REWRITING!
I was once given this very good piece of advice: when starting on the next draft, donât copy and paste everything from the first draft onto the second. Instead make comments on the first draft, and start again fresh. After writing your first draft and getting a handle on your characters, read it through and take note of whatâs working and whatâs not working, and remember that when you start on your second draft. There will obviously be huge similarities from the first draft to the second, but the second will be much improved. And then you can see your progress in your journey, which is always very satisfying!
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Iâm going to keep the poll up through tomorrow, I think, unless anyone else wants to vote, and then Iâll start making the appropriate changes to the story.Â
In case you didnât see it, the poll can be found here. If it doesnât work, let me know, Iâll make a new one.Â
Iâll probably post the link a couple more times just to ensure that everyone has a chance to vote who wants to, so keep an eye out for that.Â
As always, thanks for following the story, it really means a lot to me! And if there are any other issues or questions you guys have for me, please feel free to ask!Â