Sure thing, bub! Straight off the bat, I’d consider making a header for your blog/profile (???? sry idk what it’s called) because I think it’d look nicer than having the orange default one that tumblr automatically gives you. But hey, it’s not too big of a deal. Moving onto the actual blog, I can’t say I’m feelin’ the graphics. I think it would look better if you maybe took out the gif and added a texture or something else in it’s place? I don’t know, it just looks like it doesn’t fit in with the serene vibe that the other colours on the page give off I think the pink is just too vibrant and doesn’t quite fit in. As for the plot, I started reading when the lil’ note at the top caught my eye and if I were somebody looking to apply, I think that might put me off. I like to form plots beforehand because it makes me feel more involved in the group. I’m not even talkin’ about ships here, I just like to have solid friendships and an idea of how my character will react to others But I can see why you put that rule in place, and I’m sure some people will love it. The plot itself isn’t too original, but saying that I haven’t seen something like it in the tags at the moment so I’m liking it. It leaves a lot of room for character development, which I’m a sucker for. All in all, I personally wouldn’t join this but I do wish you good luck!