Shoot 2 - Review of Images
This image definitely has an eerie feel about it which I like however I think there is too much negative space that lacks any detail.
Adding a second blue light certainly improves this composition I would say and adds more colour, however I think it loses some of its dramatic, creepy feel.
The use of the door to act as a somewhat frame for the subject works well, and I like the silhouette and the quality of the light due to the addition of smoke. At this point in the shoot I was still trying to get myself in focus which took longer than normal because of me acting as model and photographer.
At this point I decided to start adding cigarette smoke to further visualise and show off the quality of the light, which worked well as it also filled some of the space on the darker side of the door and stands out against it well.
I changed my top to a white one as I figured it would catch the light better, and I like the way I am posing as it really shows off the flowyness of said top and how my arms/hands line up with the door in the background.
I repositioned myself, the camera and the light to be straight on with each other to create a more balanced composition, with the doorway acting as a clear frame for the subject. Due to the doors reflecting some of the light onto the subject, this resulted in them not being very silhouetted, but this can be rectified in post.
I like the way I am posed here with my arms up helps to show up the flowy quality of the top and catches more of the light, while also making the image more dynamic.
Too slow a shutter speed resulted in blurring of the subject. Was also still trying to get myself in focus at this point. The red light on the door is also a bit too bright causing the door to lose tonal detail and look flat. It is also distracting the viewer from the subject. It is also worth noting that the blue hues in these images show up as more purple toned due to the coloured gel I was using, but this can be easily fixed in camera raw in post.
Adding smoke at this stage helped bring out the difference in tone on the wall and door and stopped the image looking flat, it also added more atmosphere.
Switching to landscape helps bring more focus to the subjects face as having too much of the upper body I felt made the image lose impact.
I decided to bring down my exposure to really bring out the shadows and draw more focus to the subjects face where the light is. Bringing my upper body round more towards the camera also looks better and more dynamic.