anefiĀ a rĆ©agi Ć votreĀ billetĀ :Ā Ugh, I hate when I finish a ficlet but Iām...
thereās a post going around with writing advice that is basically, āprint out your first draft and retype it in a new document.ā Sort of re-digesting it like that really helps me identify whatās bothering me; maybe that will help?
anefiĀ a rĆ©agi Ć votreĀ billetĀ :Ā Ugh, I hate when I finish a ficlet but Iāmā¦
or if itās more structural, try talking out the plot with someone, maybe, even if just a rubber ducky, stuffed animal, or chair, to get the words into the open.
rubyredhoodlingĀ a rĆ©agi Ć votreĀ billetĀ :Ā Ugh, I hate when I finish a ficlet but Iāmā¦
*grabby hands*
rita-somethingboringĀ a rĆ©agi Ć votreĀ billetĀ :Ā Ugh, I hate when I finish a ficlet but Iāmā¦
Publish it? Honestly I lile everything you write so I think it could be awesome even if it was just your grocery list(???)
Ahh, thank you guys :)
@anefi I think thatās some sound advice. Sometimes I do something similar to that: Iāll close out of the doc on my laptop and go start rewriting it from memory on my iPad. Usually the iPad version will be better. Idk what it is about writing fic on my iPad, but it tends to turn out better than if I type it on my laptop. Maybe because the iPad forces me to type a little more slowly, but Iām not sure.Ā
Anyway, I did that with this fic, starting over from a dif. characterās POV. Ultimately I realized it wasnāt really a POV problem. I think itās more like, Iām just not feeling it emotionally and it feels a bit rushed. Maybe thatās just me. Maybe readers would like it better than I do. At this point I think the way I would fix it would be to expand the fic, but I just want to be done with it, so. Maybe I will just post it as is and see what people think.












