#rehu

(I stopped after twenty minutes because I fell asleep)

 But now I have this paragraph that fits the characters good but... not so much the thing I was writing.

 I mean mostly I’m surprised it’s actually readable. But do I rework the thing so it fits or set it aside as character interaction usefulness

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“Do you mean to leap into the mist every night, until there is nothing left of you to return?”

Erris tenses and swivels their head, owl-like, to glare at Rehu. “Do you intend to stop me?”

“Do you think so highly that I can?” Rehu arches an eyebrow. “I may think that, but I assumed we were all beneath your notice.”

Erris barks humourless laughter, baring wolf’s teeth in a grimace Rehu won’t be able to truly see. “This is a nest for the NightGales. Your kind aren’t allowed.”

“It is still atop a Sanders’ ship,” Rehu replies, hand light on the short sword by her side. It is mostly for show; Erris knows Rehu favours her cloth-wrapped fists, sometimes with spikes threaded between her fingers.

Erris smiles. “I will walk, then, again and again, and always return because I have sworn my sister so.”

Rehu tilts her head, considering Erris. “Jay means much to you.”