May Writing Challenge (1213 Words Oops) May 3
Create a detailed new character profile for the fun of it.
I can hear the rain falling and itās a welcome white noise, itās giving me something to focus on, something else to focus on. I pull the umbrella down to cover my eyes, I donāt want to see anyone else. I hate that everyone is here. What could they possibly miss about you? What could they possibly know? I was the only one who really understood you. You sacrifice yourself for the greater good. Will they ever know just what that means?
My grip tightens on the handle of my umbrella, it screams as it begins to bend. Itās a small sound but it echoes my heart. I canāt bare anymore. What has the greater good ever done for us? Why us? Why you? I feel my jaw tighten as the anger builds. I will find a way to undo this. I would rather die at your side along with the rest of this filthy planet than live without you.
Name: Durand RamĆrezĀ
Pronouns: He/Him
Age: 37
Nationality: Mexican American
Orientation: Straight Ally
Lives in: Las Vegas, Nevada
Currently in: Queens, New York
Small business owner that comes from old money. (a garden coffee shop heād gifted to his wife because it was her dream)
Widower
6ā2ā
Stalky and large upper body but not too big. He exercises regularly in his at home gym.
Deep grey eyes, cloudy with loss
Black hair, short/spikey
Square face, no scars, a little stubble, nose bent from being broken as a result of school yard fights
He prefers to wear jeans and a plane t-shirt, his wife tried to get him to wear fashionable items, but he prefers comfort.
He likes to wear a hat and prefers contacts to classes
He has no accessories except for his wedding ring, which he refuses to remove
Heās put together and hardly ever disheveled.
His only illness is a broken heart
He gestures with his arms when he is angry and his face turns red, a vein appears over his temple when heās really angry
Heās never shy about making eye contact and when otherās look away, he moves to regain their gaze.
His mantra or catchphrase is āKeep your headā something he says when heās really upset, his wife helped him come up with it.
He curses occasionally, never at work or at his employees.
He has a deep baritone voice, and it intimidates people
He hasnāt really laughed in a while, but he does chuckle at joke or when heās about to chew someone out.
When he genuinely smiles his face lights up and softens a bit. Itās beautiful but rare
Unless he is really angry or upset, he is hard to read and is often unapproachable because people can never tell when heās about to lose it until itās too late.
His default expression is flat, a small smirk rests at the corner of his mouth, this doesnāt necessarily mean he is in a good mood.
Other than his wedding ring, he carries a small coin his father gave to him as a child, this coin was the first penny his father ever earned when he moving to America.
His only anxious tick is that heāll run his thumb over his wedding ring, twisting it around his finger, it reminds him of his wife, when he needs to be grounded, heāll do this. However, He doesnāt notice that he does this.
He grew up in Nevada, just outside the city of Las Vegas, he would spend most nights looking out at the bright lights of the city and dream of winning the jackpot in order to help his family earn enough money to be comfortable.
His parents spent their time working to give him a better life, forgetting that a child needs their parents attention as well. He doesnāt blame them now that heās older but was very lonely growing up. He went to the best schools in the area. He met his future wife in middle school, but they never officially began talking until high school. He always thinks about how much more time they could have had together if heād spoken to her back in seventh grade.
He was very involved in sports at school, he tried out for a bunch of teams but likes basketball the most. He was also interested in the arts. He took a semester of band after hearing them play at one of his games. He was mediocre at sports, but he still had fun.
His earliest memory is his mother hanging laundry in the yard while he ran around chasing lizards. He can still smell the detergent sometimes.
His saddest memory before losing his wife is how his parents werenāt at his college graduation because they were both busy that day.
His happiest memory is when his parents took him to Circus Circus, they spend the entire day together.
His favorite food is pasta, doesnāt matter what kind.
He hates carrots, he keeps trying them but doesnāt like how sweet they are.
He loves classical music but doesnāt listen to it exclusively, Heāll listen to the latest hits and classic rock.
He tries to follow basketball but doesnāt have as much time as he used to so he catches the highlights in his free time.
He loves to read but there is not much time. His bookshelf is filled with books about business and law, but if you look carefully, you can find comic books among his collection.
Money is no object, but he doesnāt really care about cars, Heād prefer not to drive but when he does he wants an inconspicuous vehicle. Ā He owns a Toyota Camry
He used to be an extrovert but since losing his wife, he doesnāt want to be around people who knew them together.
Heās afraid of falling in love again, thinking it will erase what his wife meant to him.
His idea of happiness is spending the rest of his days in the middle of nowhere in a house with his family.
His favorite place in the world is Mexico, where he has extended family.
His strengths are communication and heās very charming when he wants to be.
His biggest flaw is his anger, heās had to patch a few holes in his walls. He doesnāt really hit the walls so much anymore after finding a stud once. His hand still hurts when he moves it sometimes or when it gets too cold.
What he wants most out of life is just a general comfort, he wants to feel whole again.
His ideas of love were always positive, he wanted a relationship like the one his parents had. His ideas of love are still strong even if he will not allow himself to love again.
Heās not a fan of change but he will deal with things as they come, sometimes he needs to repeat his mantra. ākeep your headā
he desires power so that he can have as much control over his own life as possible.
Heās a leader, heās always been a leader, even in his friend groups, they would all look to him to make decisions.
He gets excited when things go his way.
He finds shallow women to be boring but never really gives women a chance to change his mind.












