Enters the Story Architect.
Hello. I’m the Story Architect.
Drafting is hard.
You start with a solid idea, a strong opening chapter, maybe even characters you love… and somewhere around Chapter 3, the whole thing starts to wobble.
That’s where I come in.
I’m a beta reader focused on structure — the load-bearing walls of your story:
plot logic
pacing
conflict escalation
character motivation
endings that don’t feel rushed or hollow
I don’t just read your draft. I stress-test it.
If something doesn’t make sense, I’ll find the crack. If a subplot is weakening the foundation, I’ll flag it. If your story works? I’ll tell you why, so you can do it again on purpose.
What I Do Here
On this blog, you’ll find:
Queue feedback on submitted excerpts
Answers to plot-hole panic
Craft breakdowns for Romance, Fantasy, Mystery & YA
Gentle but honest talks about why drafts fall apart (and how to fix them)
No roasting. No vibes-only praise. Just clear, actionable notes.
Want Feedback?
Submissions are open (check the guidelines)
Ask box is open for screaming and ranting
I offer a free 500-word sample edit via DM
Your story isn’t broken. It just needs a stronger foundation.
Welcome to the drafting table.
— Story Architect
