Ch.12 mainly grammar, changed a line about French to Frankish since I’m not sure French had evolved yet at that point, even though in the httyd books Hiccup is learning modern French, so really I think I could have done it either way, since httyd has its charming anachronisms. Added a bit of dialogue to drunkstrid’s breakdown. Ch. 13 was just typos, grammar, and clunky wording. For the most part, Ch 14-18 were just typo and grammar fixes, with next to nothing changed in ch. 19-21. I doubt there will be as much change in the later chapters, since I had put together more of the story by that point when I was doing the actual writing. Everything up to ch. 21 is updated on AO3 and ff.net.
Would anyone be interested in my crossposting the entire chapters onto tumblr as well? Instead of posting 43 chapters at once I’d just update the posts that currently just have the links with the chapter text as well, and make a masterpost.