Half a year of writing
I've been writing fanfic for six months now, and just had a look back at something I wrote back in October, a VelKleya sex pollen story. I think I expected to see a lot of problems, find it "cringe", or something like that. But either it wasn't that bad, or I have failed to refine my skills, because I actually really liked it. What a fun surprise!
I could have made the 3rd person points of view more distinct, I suppose, but I labeled them, so it was clear enough. And I'd include a little more environmental detail now. But still, I don't see too much I'd do differently.
That said, I am open to constructive feedback on my writing, because I have what is sometimes called a "growth mindset" and would prefer to improve. If my pairings (VelKleya, MonKleya, and now MonCassian (lol)), tropes (sex pollen, fake dating, AU, FWB, and others), and so forth interest you, and you see some low-hanging fruit that would help me up my game, please drop me a line. Thanks!
