#nirrini

As you might see, her chest is a bit small for being a Gubai. This is a slight disability of her, which makes her unable to fly (but she can glide over short distances)

In this new rewrite a lot of stuff has changes:

- POV changes between Viktor and Sabya, instead of being just Viktor

- instead of plot keeping them away from the train station, the train station has collapsed due to a bomb, thus they have to wait for a temporary train station to be built

- the focus is more on leaving their families instead of leaving the city

I wasn't happy with it, so I looked into how I could make it better. Thus I did some changes to it, all over the place

The consonants stay the same:

There are some smaller changes to the vowel inventory:

The big stuff happened in the grammar, though. Especially to the nouns

I laid down that nouns with the same prefix and suffix lose their prefix. Well, with some exceptions

This did cause some nouns to change quite a bit when I ran it through the sound change web page, like igubai becoming bai. Thus, the Mueri tends to call the Gubais bai. Good to know

I also tried noting down how noun declension worked when taking it through the sound change webpage. Or rather I noted down the patterns I found

I also looked at the verb grammar. But truth be told, I didn't really do that much with them

And at last I worked on the personal pronouns. Good help from the sound changes again

Pink bread is a type of vegan bread made from pink wheat/fegoken and berries. It is baked like normal bread.

It is one of the few Gaofi dishes that has spread to be an internationally used dish. Especially popular in Alsrik

Pink wheat or fegoken is one of the Gaofi crops. It's wild variant is fegovite chuto. It's safe for all, except the Kiza people, to eat. Except for b-vitamins it doesn't provide much nutrients.

The biggest area where it is produced is the steppes in Eastern Gagoni

Drawings of the fegoken plant:

This is a Gaofi. Gaofi is yet another rinizu

Gaofies have green skin and leaves instead of hair. Their heads are not as strong as this, because my drawing skills is limited, unfortunately. Another thing I wasn't able to capture was that Gaofies have on average a larger muscle mass than those of the other rinizus, yet let than school books may illustrate. They (both men and women) have on average about the same muscle mass and strength as the average male human athlete

Perhaps a more interesting property of the Gaofies is that they are immune to most poisons, except for the big fives. This is useful as there are a lot of poisenous plants in Gagoni

Gaofies are damaged easily by fire, but despite this, the Gaofi-Firi population is quite big.

On ancient Alsrik

Alsrik being split into Yrfiri and Lambini in ancient times

Lambini being the more fertile lands in north western part in today's Alsrikian region

Yrfiri being the more fertile parts of the Kativi desert and the eastern rivers, which is also in the Alsrikian region

The history of Alsrik, where Alsrik is a name given to the region by the Niropians, is often most concerned by the history of Lambini.

Lambini was as Frigonistic area, filled with red Firis, but often trading and communicating with western Gagoni

Yrfiri's religion have only been preserved by the north east Desert people, as their area was less desirable. Yrfiri was filled with a mix of sand coloured Firis and red Firis

Lambini and Azifi Gohi were close allies in ancient times

As Azifi Gohi collapsed due to the plague, Lambini took "temporary" control, intended for them to establish themselves as a nation soon again.

Shortly afterward, the Makiere dynasty began and these "temporary" plans became permanent.

As the seas become safer, the people of south west Yrfiri travel further south east to partake in this new trade hub for this new thing called ocean trade

The Niropians may have appeared at this point

This hub becomes a larger city named Westurur. This city, the closer ur-s and some desert areas became what would become the last cultural recognisable areas of the Yrfiri land

Lambini had begun liking the taste of being and empire and began to expand to the great eastern river system of Yrfiri, thus most of the fertile lands now belonged to Lambini. From this point on, it didn't take a long time before Lambini took over the whole area

On Niropians

The legend says that the pigmen crossed the sea in great numbers and settled in Murni, Yrfiri and Lambini

They crossed the sea on giant seals from the land of Nirop, a land of giant mushrooms. They all got lost in a violent storm. They called their travels the Adeneivi and had a queen amongst themselves named Imarin.

The pigmen were like sentient animals. Clever and having a language of their own, but sentient as they seemed, clearly animals, as they had no ursj. Their customs were strange and they had no respect for the stars or the ocean

They also bought fragile animals, much like horses, but stamina so bad they were useless for nothing. These sickly animals were named Doropo

A funny thing that happened to the Niropians is that the Niropians that landed in Murni transformed from pigmen to Mueris, as they somehow gained Mueri ursj from the land

The pigmen in Yrfiri and Lambini became Firis

In particulary Westurur, but to a big degree in Lambini as well, the Niropian culture spread

Including the Niropian language, which somehow became the major language in Alsrik, threatening the original languages of Yrfiri and Lambini

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