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Module Outcomes:

 1: Typography + Colour briefs - Typography terms, Call my Name, Macro-Micro, Alphabet street, Your Colours and Key Principles 

2: Magazine design brief Arkitect, Filmmaker, or The Gentle Woman Magazine 

3: Social causes brief - a campaign for a social cause of your choice        

4: 10 blog posts about design agencies and their work 

I showed my storyboard to the group (university peers) and got some feedback on creating more dynamic shots inside the shop mugging scene, it needs more dynamic shots which give off a more threatening, or violent atmosphere, so I'm currently looking at how I can change the shots to make them fit the scene better.

currently reading ‘How to draw comics the Marvel way’ Which shows how you can change the angle to make the shot more dynamic:

On another note:

Possibility of splitting longer episodes into smaller/shorter ones:

So I'm still unsure but i may split episode 2 into 2 episodes, so i have episode 2 and 3. It means i get more episodes out of the work i have already done, which means i have more of a buffer when i continue making the episodes every 2 weeks in September. If i look at how long episode 1 is and then see how long episode 2 i i can see that episode 2 is way longer, episodes do not need to be consistent in length, looking at other webtoons which are out i can see this, however, i noticed i have 3 major events happening in 1 episode which may be overkill: these being the mugging from the clients brother, the suicide and the meeting with Death. I did want to move the meeting with death to happen earlier, which is why i moved around the original 1st episode (the backstory) and made that episode 3 instead, after Lucas meeting with Death, because the call to adventure needed to happen as fast as possible, as audience can get bored, however quite a few webtoons have the call to adventure happen in episode 3 and there episodes are shorter so i think this could also work, i still have the same events and pacing happening as i had planned but instead split over more episodes, so my pacing itself hasn't changed, only the episode length has. So if i do this My episodes will be medium length instead of long, and about 40- 60 panels each episode instead of 70 - 100 panels. The panels may increase in some episodes depending on the amount of suspense as this usually slows down pacing, this is why a lot of thriller and mystery webtoons are usually longer in episode length.

episode 2 currently has 13 pages, this is a lot more than the 7 for episode 1 (shown below). I can end episode 2 at the waking in the abyss and a mysterious figure behind him (Death), then continue episode 3 with the deal with Death.

I did ask on Discord for some opinions from webtoon artists and got his back:

Perspective on practice is my 4th module that i am going to be doing along side of the current module i am doing.

In this module i am going to be making an powerpoint presentation about my experience and what i learned through out the foundation year and also talk about the course i would be taking after foundation year (Graphic design).

I will also be presenting the powerpoint to one of my tutor and one of the course leader and am going to be expressing my passion towards the course and my thoughts on it.