mlghv replied to your post “serious question: what do you do when you have honestly been working...”
look for all the sentences you can make shorter: ex: "an example would be"="such as." "around the time when"="when" often we type how we talk so it seems normal but its p excessive. i guarantee there are tons of sentences w a few extra words!
you are so, so right, i definitely have many sentences like that (<--example). i will do that!
boymoans replied to your post “serious question: what do you do when you have honestly been working...”
submit what you have now and submit the finished version. explain.
my SO suggested that i do that last night (& i was like, ‘good idea! maybe i will!’ and then i didn’t) but, like, maybe i should now. this had never really occurred to me as an option before, but it really might make sense. (somehow i feel like to do this the parts i do have written ought to 1) include a proper introduction and 2) be totally polished, which i know doesn’t make sense, but.)
thanks for your serious answers, y’all! <333











