Welcome to Luenia
If Luenia was an actual book, this is probably how I'd start it. You don't get to learn about certain things that are mentioned now until much further in the story when you meet Xirastol and his knight. This was for my creative writing final last year.
The biggest thing I struggled with in this was introducing and explaining 10 characters without it sounding weird.
I think there's not much descriptors on species other than mentioning them by name so I'll do some brief explanations of them.
The Vespers and Avelus are the equivalent to demons and angels. If someone is referred to as an Avelus descent, they are the product of Avelus and mortal relationships. A scorched is a Vesper that was banished from Zizamund, the home of Vespers, much like a Fallen is an Avelus banned from Arrotria, home of most gods. There's multiple classes of dragons, but the dragon present in this story is a silver one. Silver dragons are known for their temperaments. Lastly we have 2 different kinds of mer people. Merfolk and Merelves are similar but still have a few differences. While both have scaled legs, with splotches of scales here and there on their body, only Merfolk can transform their legs into a tail. Another main difference is Merelves have the usual elf pointed ears, while Merfolk have fin ears.
That should be all!
    A young man stands in his bedroom. Itâs a lifeless room, few decorations cover the walls. It was quiet too, there was only the sound of household servants and guards footsteps almost silently passing by. He went to step towards the bed, but as he did, a faint knock on the door could be heard.Â
   He let out a sigh. â.....Yes?â
   âYour majesty, your girlfriend is here to see youâ The door was still shut, but the guardâs voice could be heard clearly.
   âLet her inâ At least one thing could go right today.
   As soon as the words left his mouth, there was a loud burst of sound as the door swung open and a much smaller girl with short black hair came running in. Immediately she scooped him up into a hug.
   âDrakor! How have you been? Youâve been so busy these past few days I couldnât see youâ She squeezed her arms around his waist, almost whining the last words.
   Drakor wheezed a bit at the sudden tight hug, borderline winded. He wrapped his arms around her back and head and cradled her for a moment, before remembering the guard still at the door.Â
   âYouâre dismissed, please close the door behind you.â Drakor made a gesture to the guard as he spoke, and they left quietly. He turned his attention back to the small girl. âOk- Culora please youâre going to suffocate me-â
   âOh oops!â She quickly let go, but not before taking her hands and ruffling up his hair. The black hair that was once lightly smoothed back was now a mess, a few small curls forming in at the ends.
   âHEY!â Drakor dipped backwards, but his smile only grew. He started running his hands through his hair to smooth it down, though the little amount of gel that was there to begin with wasnât holding it down anymore. âYou gremlin look what youâve done, it wonât stay down nowâÂ
   âThat was the point idiotâ She went to flop on his bed. âYou look way better with your hair down anyway. How are you supposed to hit on guys looking like thatâ
   Drakor giving up on fighting his hair, joined Culora on the bed. There was a faint jingle as he sat down, as all the metal on his uniform clanged together. âFirst off, rude, my hair is fine. Second, as far as everyone else in this kingdom is aware, Iâm straight and youâre my girlfriendâ
   Thatâs the one thing Drakor always struggled with, keeping up appearances. Culora in actuality is more like a little sister to him. However, both of their families have appearances to keep up. Culora is the only crystalmage in this kingdom, and Drakor was the youngest of the royal family, and a hostmage. Essentially, the living crystal bank, and a mage who can do literally all magic types.
   âUgh I hate this kingdom sometimesâ Culora groaned. âWhy are all the aquatic cities so homophobic? As soon as I can move out Iâm moving to the mainlands, I heard The Fashion District is amazingâ
   âAt least we live in the one aquatic kingdom that isnât submerged. As much as I love swimming, as all merfolk do, I like being able to style my hair. Plus! Youâre just saying that cause your little crush Utrula lives there.â
   Culora had a clearly faked expression of shock. âOh my, is Mr. Royalty accusing me? Of being a raging homosexual? How scandalous!â She gave him a soft shove on the arm.Â
   âSpeaking of Utrula, this is a new outfit. She make it?â Drakor picked up a small piece of fabric that hung off her waist. It was normal for Culora to suddenly appear with new outfits. Though heâs noticed theyâre consistently off the shoulder crop tops and something with chiffon wrapped around the waist, whether theyâre above the shorts or a part of a skirt.Â
âYep! I told her I wanted to try pink and blue for the lace this time, think it suits me?â She put her hands up to her face, making a cutesy expression.Â
âThatâs chiffon, not lace. But, yes, it looks cuteâ
âClose enough. What about you huh? This uniform has not changed in like, 6 years what is your family on? White is not your colour, no offenseâ Culora lightly yanked at one of the many chains that hung around the collar of his uniform.
âPublic appearances Culora, I can hardly leave the castle without at least one nice thing on. Literally, I tried going out wearing something youâd see on the common folk and my mother nearly threw a tantrumâ He threw his hands in the air to emphasize, before letting them flop back down.
âNot even a hoodie?â Â Â Â âNice coats onlyâ Â Â Â Culora made a disgusted face. âShe is cynicalâ
   âThatâs mother for youâÂ
".......Anyway. How's your sister?" Culora flipped over to lay on her stomach, arms propping up her head.
   "Culora. You need to be more specific. You know I have 3"
   "Fine, your brother"
   "And you know I have 4 of those!"
   "I know I know, I'm just teasing" Culora giggled. "I meant the eldest one. Veilannaiâ
   âI mean, I assume sheâs fine. I donât see her much since mom and dad drag her from lesson to lesson. Prized child, remember?âÂ
   âAh thatâs rightâ Culora nodded. âI mean, at least itâs not youâ
   âYeahâŚ...Well enough about my family. What brings you here, surely you didnât come all the way up here just to chat about my siblings and my uniform?âÂ
   Culora jolted upright, now sitting instead of laying down. âOh right! We got the whole group together! Even Veryan and Porter took time away from their projects to come hang out! And you are coming with, even if I have to sneak you out of this castle myselfâ
   âOh? Everyone? Even Vridak?â Drakor raised an eyebrow.
   âOf course Vridak will be there, heâd never pass up an opportunity to see everyoneâ
   âLetâs get out of here, weâll use the servant's passage. I donât want to be dragging a body guard around, and you know if mother sees me leaving sheâll make one come withâ Drakor stood up from the bed. âBut I do need to change first, I am not wearing this outâ
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   Drakor stepped out onto the mainland, a soft breeze hitting his hair. He had missed this. Between all the repetitive lessons and training, he hadnât been able to visit the mainland in a few weeks. He took a moment to take it in. The environment was much different from the kingdom. While the kingdom wasnât submerged like the rest of the aquatic kingdoms, it still didnât have the natural charm. There were so many trees, and you could hear birds chirping. The kingdom was nothing like this. It was pretty sure, but only through architecture. There were close to no natural areas outside of the royal courtyard.
   âHow mad do you think our parents would be if we just suddenly moved?â Drakor was facing the forest still. âIf we just, took our stuff and leftâ
   âI mean, my parents would freak. And your parents? I canât even begin to imagineâ Culora scoffed at the question, though sheâd be lying if she said she didnât want the same.
   âI mean, weâre not teenagers anymore. Weâre both 20. They shouldnât get to dictate our lives anymoreâ Drakor turned to face the ocean behind them. âItâs not like Iâm going to get to rule one day, I have 7 siblings, 6 of which are older than meâ
   â...Hey, whereâs this coming from? You were all excited to be out here and now youâre getting all existential on meâ Culora had a look of concern on her face.
âI donât know. I havenât been up here in a while, I guess finally getting out of there is reminding me of how much I hate it thereâŚâŚ.and Iâve been thinking about Areina againâŚâ
   âThat wasnât your fault Drakorâ Culora put a hand on his shoulder. âThere wasnât anything you couldâve doneâ
   âThatâs not what Tyreena thinksâ Drakor sighed, he closed his eyes for a moment before turning back to Culora. âLetâs get going. Theyâre probably waiting on us nowâ
   Culora was still worried for him, but let the subject drop.Â
   âYea, letâs goâ Culora grabbed his hand and started dragging him away from the shoreline and further into the forest. âThis way! The nearest town is just a few minutes away and we can transport to our meeting place from thereâ
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   The cityscape was bustling as it usually is. People walked the streets, while many cars sped by. The city of Eventrus was one of the many big cities on the east side of the mainland, as well as one of Drakorâs favourite to visit. The tall buildings reflected brightly under the midday sun, perfect weather for a group outing.Â
   The Eventrus town square was one of the busiest parts of the city. The large open space was full of passersby and a few pop up vendors that made a small market. The wide staircase that stretched around the town square had many groups of people sitting on them, including a particular group of 8. Who of which were causing quite a ruckus, thought it was pretty normal for others to see here.
   âHOLD ON, HOLD ONâ A loud screech erupted from a horned man, his spaded tail flicking in agitation. A few people gave him awkward glances, as Scorched were not often seen in public.
   âVridak oh my god are we doing this again-â A girl of similar height was facepalming, she had a soft appearance that contrasted with her sharp snake eyes. Anyone who looked at her could tell she was from The Fashion District, she had that somewhat strange but elegant look to her. The trail of her skirt was draped across the steps below her, borderline getting stepped on because of the length.
   âYES THIS AGAIN UTRULAâ Vridak pointed his finger at the girl accusingly, before shifting to point at the Fae in the group. âCRAYTON LISTEN, HER SISTER WAS A WITCH RIGHT?â
   While Vridak was yelling, the Fae, come to be known as Crayton, was absolutely losing it. He was hunched over, laughing too hard to give a proper response to Vridak. Along with Vridak, Crayton also received some weird looks. One, because he was also a part of the loud ruckus, but two, he was a rare hybrid between cyber and nature Faes. Not a common occurrence, even in modern times. The giveaway factor was the standard hologram accessories for Cyber Faes, mixed with the very obvious Nature Fae wings.
   âAND WHAT WAS HER SISTER? A PRINCESS. THE WICKED WITCH OF THE EASTâ Vridak continued on with his rant, not caring about all the people who were now glaring.
   âSomeone please stop him, I donât want to get kicked out of the square againâŚâ A small Nymph softly spoke. She was practically glued to the arm of an Aviad sitting next to her, who towered over her even when sitting.    âOh come on Dalira, theyâre just having fun. Plus Vridak doesnâ have long tangents, heâll stop yelling soonâ The Aviad gave Dalira a soft pat on the head.Â
   Next to them a Wood Elf spoke up. âI donât know Porter, this one sounds longâ She was tinkering with something in her lap, not looking up when speaking. She paused for a moment to retighten her ponytail, a mess of black curls swinging back, before picking up the object again.
   âYou know Veryan, for being a mechanic you sure do have rather hazardous clothing. I donât think flared long sleeves are ideal for machine workâ Porter poked at the sleeves of her turtleneck.Â
   The bickering of the group continued, yelling and jabs being thrown around. There was a huge shadow that covered the group, and upon looking up they saw 2 winged figures damn near plummeting towards them.Â
   Scales of silver reflected the sunlight from the first winged figure, while the other figure had bright blue and white feathers. At the very last second both figures suddenly outstretched their wings, bringing them to a softer landing rather than a huge crash in the pavement.Â
   âHah! In your face Tyreena!â The feathered man out stretched his arm to point at the silver haired woman. As he moved his arm, the feathers retracted turning his wings into a normal pair of arms.Â
   Tyreena put her hand to her chest, feigning shock. âNo way, I totally landed before you Demitriusâ She smacked his arm away with one of her wings. Unlike him, her arms and wings were separate. âEveryone knows dragons are faster than measly angel descentsâÂ
   âYeah, maybe in your full form! But youâre totally slower than me in your half form!â Demitrius was borderline screaming, while Tyreena simply brushed him off and untangled her hair from her horns.
   âDear SiLENNIA YOU TWO SCARED USâ Crayton was on his back, propping himself up with his elbows to look up at the 2 that quite literally crashed in.Â
   Craytonâs complaint was drowned out by more bickering from the 2, as well as a few sudden yells from other group members.
   âHey look! Sea Dwellers 5 OâClock!â Vridak called out, frantically pointing in the direction of the approaching Culora and Drakor. Upon spotting them, Drakor broke into a run towards the group. Or more of, a bee line straight to Vridak.
   He practically tackled Vridak, ruffling up his hair. âHow have you been dude? You never visit!âÂ
   Vridak ducked out of Drakors arms and quickly wrapped his arm around his torso and fell backwards, dragging them both to the floor. The roughhousing boys wrestled for a couple more moments before they were laughing too hard to keep going.Â
   âIâve missed you, you need to come up from that damn castle more oftenâÂ
   Culora quickly stepped around the boys and immediately ran up to Utrula, who was waiting ready with her arms open. Culora grabbed her from the waist and lifted her into the air, almost with ease. The girls were practically squealing with delight, spinning around a couple times.Â
   While the 4 of them were greeting their best friends, the rest of the group welcomed Tyreena and Demitrius to the party. After everyone had settled down again, Veryan spoke up.
   âNow that everyoneâs here, we should head into the market. I wanna see what vendors are here todayâ She had stood up from her spot on the staircase, trinket now in her side satchel.Â
   There were murmurs and nods of agreement, and the whole group stood up and started to make their way over to the market in the centermost area of the town square. Pop up tents of varying colours were lined up, with even more varying types of merchandise. Many of the vendors were people sharing their crafts, jewelry, food, and other trinkets.Â
   âOooo look!â Tyreena was hopping up and down in place, pointing excitedly at a small booth towards the back. The tent was mostly enclosed, with just the entrance being illuminated. The part that caught Tyreenaâs eye was the dragon symbol on the front, as well as the numerous, probably fake, jewels hanging around.
   The group weaved through the crowd to the booth, a few peeked their heads into the dimly lit tent. Shuffling in, they realized the space was much bigger than it had appeared on the outside.
   âMmm, someone knows their magic it seemsâ Drakor gave the tent a glance around. âNot many people know this advance of magic, making a space bigger on the insideâ
   Lining the many shelves was a mix of magic trinkets, the legal kind that is, as well as what appeared to be board game pieces. Crystal balls and glass figures reflected the fairy lights strung around the tent. The group spread out around the area, each looking at their own thing.Â
   âWhy hello there!â A voice suddenly invaded the quiet scene, startling some. An older man dressed in simple, almost wizard-like robes emerged from seemingly nowhere. âWelcome to Dragonâs Keep! My name is Iviar. Iâve got many little knick knacks here, please do not be afraid to ask questionsâÂ
   âOh! Uh, thank you Iviarâ Utrula was slightly off-put by his sudden appearance. She grabbed a small mirror off the shelf, looking it over. âIs this enchanted?â
   Iviar clasped his hands together, making his way to her side. âAh yes! This mirror is indeed enchanted. Simply look into it, state a colour and voila! Changes your hair colour in the blink of an eye!âÂ
   âAhâ Utrula gently placed the mirror back down on the shelf. âI think Iâm ok with my current hair colourâ She gave a small laugh.
   âWhat about this?â Tyreena had also pulled something off the shelf to admire.    âAh well that my dear friend-...âÂ
   The voices faded out as Culora went further into the tent, something in the back catching her eye. A long table, large enough to seat 15, was secluded. Sprawled across the table were loose papers, plastic figurines and many dice. The face of the table appeared to be a map. Culora reached her hand out to touch the surface, only to be met with the landscape present to change. Curious, she poked her hand to the table again, this time making a swiping motion. The map on the table moved with her motion.Â
   âHuh, coolâ She thought.
   âI see youâve found the table!â Iviar had once again suddenly appeared, no signs of him walking up. Culora nearly jumped out of her skin. Faintly hearing them from the back, the rest of the group one by one showed up to see what was happening.Â
   âIs this...a game? I see a lot of dice. Oh, and the tableâs neat. Makes me think of a giant GPSâ Culora stepped to the other side of the table to admire some of the figures and dice.
   âWhy yes! This is quite the rare find too, the table was crafted by Hierophant himself! The table is set to this one map, but thereâs many areas to itâ Iviar made a pinching motion on the table, and the map zoomed out to show the entire continent and its islands.Â
   âHierophant? You managed to get your hands on an arcana craft?â Veryan was absolutely starstruck by the contraption. âWhat is this used for?â
   âHierophant crafted this for his friends to play a game with him, I believe he has since made a new one and this one was gifted away. The game nowadays is referred to as Dungeons and Dragons!âÂ
   âTheâŚ.the roleplaying game?â Porter stared at the items around the table. âThat explains the dice and figurinesâ    âThis doesnât look like Lepliora, or even Zarithya. Is this map a fake location?â Porter was giving the map a once over, not recognizing any of the landmarks.
   âThis is Luenia! Luenia may not be a part of our planet, however it is realâ Iviar made his way to the head of the table, where a painted cardboard wall was set. He took a seat behind the wall, only his head visible over the top of it. âWould you like to try? Think of it as a free trial in case youâd like to purchaseâ
   âI mean, it doesnât hurt to tryâ Veryan sat down at one of the seats, clearly still excited about the table more than anything.
   âIâm ok. I donât even know how to playâ Utrula was stepping backwards away.Â
   âNonsense dear! Youâll pick it up fast I assure you, plus Iâm sure the others would prefer to have everyone here, yes?â Iviar made a motion for everyone to sit.
   There were a few unsure looks glanced at one another, but ultimately everyone sat down. Iviar waved his hand, levitating some papers from a shelf behind him to his hands. He put a small stack on the center of the table.
   âChoose a character sheet, make sure to look through and choose wisely. This will determine your skills and magics you can use in the gameâ
   There were a few minutes of shuffling papers around, everyone reading through descriptions until they settled on one. Iviar floated the remaining excess papers back to their place on the shelf. Tapping on the table a few times, he made another motion causing the landscape of the map to shift. It zoomed in on a kingdom and its town, before becoming three dimensional. The height of the castle stretched a little over their heads, the terrain popping up and out of the tableâs surface.Â
   âWelcome to the kingdom of VaivernâÂ
   Suddenly, the map started to surround the room in a purple smoke. A few members of the group went into a coughing fit, others standing up in a panic. The room was fully encased in the thick smoke, no one could even see their hand in front of them.
   âEnjoy your stay~â Iviarâs voice faded out, the smoke finally dissipating.
   After a moment the smoke cleared out completely. The back area of the tent being replaced by a vast field, the clear blue sky overhead and the sun beating down on them.Â
   âWhat the-â Drakor coughed up the last of the smoke left in his system, exhaling a small purple puff. âWhere the hell are weâÂ











