Good patient
Medical Play
My first kinktoberđ„č
Trafalgar Law x fem! Reader
â ïž: Explicit smut, rough sex, multiple orgasms, graphic language, misuse of medical tools (speculum, retractors, cervical brush, vaginal probe), spanking, dominant/submissive dynamics. NSFW, 18+ only.
English is not my native language. I hope I wrote it correctly. Please point out any mistakes.đ„čđ«¶đ»
You sit on the couch, legs curled up under you, the glow of your laptop screen illuminating your face in the dim living room. The video plays softlyâsome cheesy doctor-themed porn, the kind where the "patient" moans dramatically as the "doctor" pretends to examine her with exaggerated professionalism. It's silly, but it's turning you on, your hand idly slipping between your thighs as you watch. You don't hear the door open at first, too absorbed in the scene.
Then, Law's voice cuts through the air. "I'm home." His tone is neutral, but when you snap your laptop shut in a panic, he's already seen enough. He stands there in his work scrubs, his tattooed arms crossed, those sharp gold eyes flicking from the screen to you. A faint smirk tugs at his lips, but he doesn't say a word about it. Instead, he just heads to the kitchen, grabbing a beer from the fridge like nothing happened. You feel your cheeks burn, muttering an excuse about "just browsing," but he waves it off. "Whatever you want," he says casually, and that's the end of it. Or so you think.
A few days pass, and the incident fades into the background. Law's as busy as ever with his shifts at the hospital, coming home late, his doctor coat slung over his shoulder. He's always been attractiveâtall, lean, with that messy black hair and those piercing eyes that make your stomach flip. But in his white coat? God, he's irresistible. You catch yourself fantasizing about it sometimes, but you push it down.
Then, one evening, you come home from work to find the apartment unusually quiet. The lights are dimmed, and there's a note on the kitchen counter in Law's precise handwriting: "Head to the bedroom. Doctor's orders." Your heart skips a beatâcurious, a little excited. You push open the door, and your jaw drops.
The room's been transformed. He's pushed the furniture aside, draped a white sheet over the bed like an exam table, and set up a small tray on the nightstand with⊠medical tools? A speculum, retractors, a cervical brush, swabs, even a vaginal probeâthings you've only seen in diagrams or those videos. Law stands there in his full doctor attire: white coat buttoned up, stethoscope around his neck, gloves on his hands. He doesn't smile, doesn't break character. "Miss [Your Last Name]," he says formally, gesturing to the bed. "Please have a seat. I'm Dr. Trafalgar, and we'll begin your examination shortly."
You blink, laughing nervously. "Law, what is thisâ"
His hand moves faster than you expect, landing a sharp slap on your thigh. Not hard enough to bruise, but enough to sting and make you gasp. "It's Doctor Trafalgar," he corrects, his voice low and professional, eyes narrowing. "We're keeping this formal. Now, remove your clothes from the waist down and lie back. We have a full check-up to do."
Your pulse races. This is⊠hot. Weirdly hot. You obey, stripping off your pants and underwear, feeling exposed as you climb onto the "exam table" and spread your legs as he instructs. He pulls up a stool between them, snapping on fresh gloves with a clinical snap. "Good patient," he murmurs, but there's a dark glint in his eyesâhis freakish fantasies bubbling under that stoic facade. He starts slow, palpating your abdomen with firm, gloved fingers, pressing just enough to make you squirm. "Any discomfort?" he asks, voice steady.
"No, Doctor," you whisper, playing along. But when his fingers trail lower, brushing your inner thighs, you whimper his name. "Lawâ"
Slap. This time on your ass, harder, making your skin bloom red. "Doctor," he reminds you sternly. "Focus." He reaches for the speculum next, lubing it up with clinical precision. "This might feel cold," he warns, inserting it slowly, the metal spreading you open. You gasp at the stretch, your body clenching around it. He clicks it open wider, locking it in place, and peers inside like it's a real exam. "Everything looks healthy so far," he says, but his breath is heavier now. He picks up a retractors, using them to hold you even more exposed, his gloved fingers tracing your folds under the pretense of "inspection."
You're soaking already, arousal dripping onto the sheet. "Please," you beg, but he shushes you.
"Patience is key in medicine." He grabs the cervical brush nextâa thin, swab-like toolâand dips it in lube. "This is for sampling," he explains coolly, but instead of a quick swipe, he slides it in deep, twisting it against your sensitive walls. You arch off the bed, moaning as he works it in and out, brushing over your cervix in slow, deliberate strokes. It's filthy, wrong, but the friction builds fast. "Feel that? That's your body responding," he says, voice husky now. He doesn't stop, pumping it faster, the bristles teasing nerves you didn't know you had. Your first orgasm hits like a wave, clenching around the tool as you cry out.
"Good girl," he praises, but he doesn't pull it out. Instead, he swaps to the swab, repeating the motionâdipping it in, swirling it inside you, collecting your "sample" while you tremble from aftershocks. "We're not done. Multiple tests required." Slapâanother on your thigh when you whine his name again. "Doctor."
He sets aside the swab, coated in your wetness, and reaches for the vaginal probeâa sleek, vibrating tool meant for ultrasounds, but he flicks it on low, pressing the tip to your clit first. You jolt, hips bucking. "Hold still," he orders, sliding it inside you alongside the speculum, the vibrations pulsing deep. It's overwhelmingâthe stretch, the buzz, his gloved hand holding you open with the retractors. He thrusts it methodically, like calibrating an instrument, hitting your g-spot with precision. "Orgasm two incoming," he announces clinically, and sure enough, you shatter again, squirting around the probe, soaking his gloves.
By now, his coat is still on, but you can see the bulge in his pantsâmassive, straining. He finally stands, unzipping just enough to free his cock, thick and veined, pre-cum beading at the tip. "Final procedure," he says, voice rough. He doesn't undress further, just positions himself between your legs, the speculum still holding you wide. He thrusts in hard, filling you completely, the tools amplifying every sensation. "Fuck, you're tight," he growls, breaking character just a bit, but he recovers. "Patient's vitals are elevated."
He fucks you relentlesslyâdeep, punishing strokes, one hand on your hip, the other twisting the probe inside you for extra stimulation. Slapâon your breast this time when you scream "Law!" "Doctor, damn it." The rhythm builds, his hips slamming into yours, the white coat brushing your skin. You come again, vision blurring, but he doesn't stop, chasing his own release. "One more," he demands, angling to hit deeper, his freak side fully outâwhispering how he'd love to "dissect" you like this every night.
Finally, he pulls out, stroking himself to finish on your stomach, hot ropes painting your skin. He steps back, breathing heavy, but still in role. "Examination complete. You're cleared⊠for now."
You lie there, spent, multiple orgasms leaving you boneless. LawâDoctor Trafalgarâsmirks, finally shedding the coat. "Next appointment soon?"
©Written by Lee













