I LOVVVVEDDDD this. 6 had been my favorite so far, and i was very excited for this one. Amazing. If you take critism (im not a writer and i dont know what im talking about so feel free to ignore, this fic is already amazing) i wouldve loved to see you push remus a bit farther as a dom. Like if he had said something like "After this, you'll have no choice but to join in the aftercare" (or something like that, not a writer) i wouldve swooned. Again, this fic was amazing already - KC
Yes I *always* take criticism! Any and all—I don’t always apply it but I always value it! I’m so glad you liked this! I’ve fallen in love with this little storyline. Two more parts are coming this month! Part three on Day 20 and part four on Day 24! Thanks again for the feedback and thank you for reading!
