#inkspireedits

Today I received a review from my first Beta reader @inkspireedits whom give me some:

With a well organized and clear word drive with very punctual and useful questions which were answered with an honest opinion; targeting each topic in analytical way, but also on the emotional way and how they impact the story.

Some of the more important points for me were the: “Show more-tell less”. I admit I tend to get lost a bit on explanations, and thanks to those observations I would be more careful to not be so repetitive.

I am pretty much aware that grammar and format are my biggest weakness. English is not my first language but I haven’t even thought about punctuation or separate dialogue tags. There was an example included on the drive of how the dialogues would sound better and how they should be written to be clearer.