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hi kaitlynn!! *waves like a maniac* going off of our thread for tate and zareen... and some heavy stalking of your blog... first of all congratulations on having good spelling and grammar and by extension... good sentence flow! bless your soul for having a writing style that’s comfortable, easy on the eyes. one sentence leads easily into the next- you know how honey looks when it’s trickling off of spoon? all glowing in the light, pouring nice and slow and steady? your sentence flow is like that. it’s casual, pretty and not at all choppy thANK GOD because i love your brain. your brain is insanely awesome, so thank goodness your writing flows so well. it makes writing with you even more of a pleasure. OH and you write dialogue really well! realistic dialogue is HARD but you manage to do it. you know to frame the dialogue in different ways- speech tags, action, thought- it’s all varied and awesome and exactly like how you would observe a conversation between two people if you were a mind-reading ghost. so spot on there!! OOOH and!!! back to the things you use to frame dialogue- thought, action etc. you have a REALLY good balance between like all the things you can include in a reply! you give a little bit of everything- you delve into characters’ current and past thoughts, you use the five senses, dialogue, they react to other people and their surroundings- essentially you put everything in a scene that should be in a scene to make if fleshed out and intriguing and VOILA i and all your partners always have more than enough in every single one of your replies to give you (hopefully) the same back. you know what you’re doing but it feels easy and effortless for you and i love it! so here’s your mess of a compliment on your writing, i hope it’s okay! i know my brain be weird but it comes from the heart dshfj

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After Dany and Zareen hash it out, Dany starts taking her to all the celeb places to catch the new goss and witness other celeb fights that go on around Hollywood

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The other mechanics can hear Keeli before they see her — she’s stomping, muttering angrily, and then she’s shoving her belongings into their locker as she gets ready for her shift. “Remember how my parents are making me stay until Raina’s baby is born?” she says. The words are directed to no one in particular but she knows Yasir will listen. “Well guess who’s pregnant now? Marjorie!” Keeli yanks her hair into a disasterous ponytail. “I think my sisters are planning to keep getting knocked up so I’ll have to stay here for f---ing ever.”

“angry. i’m... i’m angry.” it’s a sudden revelation for nova herself, even as she stands in front of the other. her hands ball into fists without any prompting. she crosses her arms as a remedy to that --- though, it’s not much better. every stance she takes is angry. defensive. though, maybe it’s only natural after what’s happened. “i don’t think there’s anything left to say, really.” she lifts her chin, but the tears come streaming down her face whether she wants them to or not. she still loves the person standing across from her. she loves them with all her heart. “maybe we shouldn’t see each other anymore,” she tries to say, but her voice cracks on the very last word. she isn’t even sure if she means it.