I was tagged by @lilquill, who’s a pretty cool cat--check them out if you don’t already follow them.
Here’s the last few lines I wrote in the second draft of How to Break a Deadly Curse. Things have been coming along really nicely, actually, so I have some very recent (circa yesterday) stuff to share for once!
“Look, there.” Rowan points to the tunnel directly across from the one she and the others entered through. “That’s where we need to go. At the end of that one is the hideout thing we’re looking for.”
She leads the way again, over the slippery stone floor. The whole room is soaked with spray, so everything is just a little bit more treacherous than normal. Cassia nearly slips a couple of times because she’s wearing heels, so Milo carries her across, leaving Katsurou to navigate on his own.
“I’m the disabled one here,” Katsurou cries. “Have you not noticed the clunky metal leg I’m packing around?”
David, however, is hanging back a bit, even though he could be across by now. The others are ahead of him, but he’s waiting--waiting for Katsurou.
Katsurou glowers up at him. “It would be nice if you gave me a hand. Not that you can understand me, right? Maybe I should learn to ask for help in Russian. Or, maybe your buddies could learn to lend a hand, too.”
Okay, maybe it was more like the last few paragraphs, but whatever. I like this scene as it is. Katsurou is being a bit of a jerk, as usual--but this time it’s a little bit warranted. Nobody tried to help him cross.
Well, David is about to. I just haven’t written that part yet.
Tagging @radley-writes, @montevena, and anyone else who sees this and wants to do it!