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LARGE:

FIRST LOOK: 4/5

URL: I like it! It’s clean and to the point, and it’s also intriguing enough that I want to know more. Good choice!

PLOT (SIDEBAR): It’s beautifully written, although sometimes it was a bit confusing. It also gives a good intro to the beginning of the plot, but not so much the main plot. I think a smaller summary could be produced and then include the read more link. I do want to know more, but if I was just skimming, I wouldn’t know much of what to expect.

OVERALL: I’m intrigued, which is a good thing for new RPs!

THEME: 8/10

THEME: It’s simple, but effective. That says a lot about an RP, and I really enjoy when it’s easy to find what I’m looking for. The font is a nice size. I have a big screen with a high resolution, so if the font is too small it makes it very hard to read, but this is a good size.

COLORS: It’s very simple, and I personally enjoy that. For the plot, I kind of expected a darker theme, but it doesn’t hinder the RP at all.

LINKS & NAVIGATION: The links on the top bar are all the important ones, so that’s good. I personally like when the rules/faq is more accessible than having to go through the full navigation, but that might just be me. I’d look into having a specific link (perhaps in the sidebar where you have other links). For the most wanted as well, it might be a good place for a link to the full canon list.

GRAPHICS: 10/10

THEME GRAPHICS: The header is well made, again simple and to the point. I love the font used! The coloring goes well with the white theme. The pictures in the sidebar are a similar coloring (I can’t entirely tell if they are the same one, but they are close enough that it looks good). I love the uniformity.

CHARACTER GRAPHICS: Again, the similar coloring makes it really nice. It looks good with the theme. I can tell you’ve worked everything out to coordinate which always makes me happy to see.

PLOT: 7/10

THOUGHTS: It’s a long read, and there isn’t really a short summary to really get the gist of it. Once again, I think the sidebar is a good place to put a shortened version of the plot to get people interested in reading the full one, rather than just including the first paragraph of the full plot. It’s the synopsis on the back cover-it pulls the reader into opening the book. Now, beyond that, it’s very well written and interesting enough that I think those who do take the time to read it will love it.

CHARACTERS: 10/10

FACES: You have a wide variety of faces available, and it’s very diverse. A lot of role plays are trying to do that now, but you’ve done it very successfully. Good work. 

BIO LAYOUT: It’s effective and to the point! All the valid information is right up front and then you have separated everything else into easy to identify sections. They are all pretty well written as well! You’ve definitely developed interesting characters.

APPLICATION: The process is simple enough and the application itself is enough to make the player really think and plan out the character. It’s well done.

OTHER COMMENTS: Lovely work! I don’t really have anything to add, you’ve done a great job of developing the characters and giving options. I especially like that you haven’t predetermined the gender/sexual identities of the characters. That gives players some freedom!

RULES & ADMINS: 10/10

ADMINS: As with everything I’ve noticed, the sidebar mentioning of the admins is simple and effective.  It puts the necessary information out in the open. Your little introductions in the administration link are so cute, and you seem like lovely people. Definitely the type of people RPers would want to know!

RULES: You’ve covered all your bases with the rules and information. I don’t really have any questions about it! But like I said earlier, I think having a direct link to the rules somewhere would be very helpful!

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