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I started notes for magicians' uniforms and came out of it with full fledged magic levels notes etc. And a striking understanding that I need to rethink the color-coded uniforms... you can only discern so many shades of green...
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Time to explain my wip badly in one sentence;
Teenager mc ran away because she felt like it, and almost accidentally caused an apocalypse with a book.
Anybody else, feel free to add your wips in a sentence too!
Find the Word Tag Game
-Thanks for tagging me @cheeto-flavoured-pasta! My words are event, listen, worry, and seek. So I’m going to use my WIP (Gafania).
event
I couldn’t find ‘event’ itself so far in what I’ve got in 3rd person, so I’m using ‘events’ instead.
“... And the image certainly did get through to Aitalanu (her home universe) who was flummoxed by the turn of events and had a serious case of ‘she’s still a baby, I’m not ready’.”
listen
Found only one so far for this one.
“Romana, I am a healer. Please listen to me. People here are dying and no one knows why—that is part of the reason I was so upset about being lied to. But right now I only have one goal, and that goal is to keep you alive. In order to do that, I have to ask you to leave.”
worry
Found a lot for this one, but this was the part I picked.
‘One day, she told herself. One day he just may come home. But I worry for the girlchild, for if that is David and that is his daughter, from Alethea she did come just like Anadorna’s prophecy fortold. But to give such a terrible fortelling credibility…
I worry for what this may mean for the girlchild herself.’
seek
Only one sentence for this word.
‘I wonder how long the funeral for this tragedy will go on, Onalvah continued to write. We seek to put all to rest and to memorialize the city, but I did not have it in my heart to go. I can still hear the lament from my room...’
That’s it! This was nice to do. Tagging @ryns-ramblings and @asher-orion-writes If you play your words are; year, heart, carry and weight.
Gafania's first 4 chapters have titles now. I caught so many slip-ups when reading it aloud, mainly with 1st person POV slipping into 3rd, & with forgetting that the main character can't see small details without her glasses (which is hilarious that I'd forget that considering I have people ask me 'whose is this?' while waving something at me from across the room & I have to say 'I don't know, I can't see it').So fixing those slip-ups are on my to-do list, right along with some flow & phrasing. I've also got to complete a set of character notes for a side character (Erin) that I ended up introducing way sooner than expected after the critique. Got to start the ch 36-40 plot grid too. First 4 chapter titles are these:
1. Brace Yourself
2. They Died to Bears
3. Breaking News: I'm Real
4. The Worst Christmas Present Ever
Everything's going well with my editing! Because of how many changes I've been having to make I have an additional step before doing the plot grid and really making it good quality for the critique-- which I refer to as preliminary editing lol. Well, I'm almost to the end of my preliminary edits for this chapter segment (36-40). I just have to work on the editing for 40 before making the dreaded plot grid. I'm actually coming up to the climax of the book! THIS THING IS ACTUALLY GETTING DONE.Can you tell I'm excited? lol
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2 chapters of the way through my 5 chapter plot grid. Normally I like to sit down and do the plot grid in one day, but I'm sick, so this will have to do for now. As long as I'm pushing forward through the work...
So glad my spouse likes to hear what I'm working on. Me: So this character has x outfit in these colors... Spouse: Isn't this the alien that can see infrared? Me: Yeah. *BOTH FREEZE* Spouse: Maybe we should check those colors? 😂
Looks like I'll be quickly going through the whole book and tearing the plot grids apart so I hopefully don't have to redo the entire plot grid every time I run into a problem. #amwriting #amediting
