Live blog ANBU Legacy thread -Ā Fluid Boundaries
āGenma was comfortable, effervescently happy, and profoundly relaxed, but sharp and alert, and fully in control.ā
This is going on my list of things I want to try out whenever I am going to cross into another reality ā drinking some of the tanuki sake. I mean seriously? Who wouldnāt dream of experiencing something like this just through a sip of liquified bliss?
Ā āAnd my dad would be sad if I didnāt come home. Itās almost my birthday, and he always bakes a big cake.ā That, at last, seemed to be the argument that made sense to the little tanuki. Understanding dawned on Hidekiās face. āMy dad makes us cakes, too.ā
I mean this is so fantastic??? Like how Genma is gently explaining his reasons for leaving and getting on a level of reasoning that is relatable to everyone? I mean who wouldnāt want to be home for a big birthday-cake made with love? By their dad nonetheless? I love the cake-baking-dads <3
Ā āIf you canāt sleep, you can meditate about obedience.ā
I am SO gonna save this sentence for the time when my kids are teens and arguing over bedtime! I just love this whole parent child interaction you set up here so much!
Ā Kurenai was leaning back on her hands, with her hair tumbling loose around her shoulders. A faint breeze ruffled the inky waves, blowing tendrils back from her forehead. Her hitai-ate was wrapped casually around her wrist, with the heavy metal plate cushioning one palm from the grass.
Your writing is always so rich and descriptive (is that a word?) I am always feeling so close to your world and characters and getting lost in your story telling, so much atmosphere!
Ā āIād like to get the story from you without any bias from your youngster with the fleabags.ā
As if Kakashi would ever share his bias xD
Ā Raidou loosened his armor and pulled his shirt away from his chest with a sticky sound. āPoint,ā he said with a grimace.
Aaaaawww Raidou is always so flowery and expressive xD
Ā āIs this a⦠native aspect of your natural form?ā Kurenai asked. Her composure was impressive, but even more amazing was how she could find it in herself to ask technical questions of a god.
Kurenai is like damn impressive and terrifying? I mean she is like always on duty fishing for information? Even when she is quietly observing in the background that you can nearly forget her presence until it is there again with a well thought out question?
She let herself drink them in for three deep breaths before she redirected her attention back to her own gear. At least her body could not visibly betray her. And she did badly want a bath.
You cannot imagine how often I have had that thought. I mean we have to suffer periods, cramps, have to do all the difficult parts of getting a baby, not to get into all the social cons, but AT LEAST our body doesnāt show our attraction as obviously. I have been glad about this small mercy really oftenā¦
Ā but what is commonplace to shinobi may appear alarming to outsiders
yes that may be the case xD
Ā They could leave that to the Intel analysts, who would find five yearsā worth of lunchtime feuds and several never-to-be-published monographs in the contents of the forthcoming mission reports.
I love this image and how you make me want to read the nerdy squabbles of Intel analysts!
āAlmost fatally,ā Kurenai admitted ruefully.
Genma said quietly, āAlmost fatally?ā āAlmost fatally,ā Raidou said firmly
Your way of giving them voices, conveying so much through little perfectly placed emphases and punctuations. Perfect.
I also immensely enjoy the scene between Kurenai, Genma and the perfect bun. Genma is always so kind and attentive.
Ā That wording still left loopholes wide enough to run a genin team through, and half of them were intentional.
Worldbuilding.
āThe thing you need to know about me, Raidou, and maybe itās something you still need time to trust, is that whatever I am to you, and whatever you are to me, Iām a Konoha shinobi first and last. And Iām pretty sure you are, too. We both took that oath, and neither one of us would break it.ā
Aaaaawwww Genma, how is anybody supposed not to fall in love with you? I immensely enjoyed that interaction between the three of them and I am a huge fan of your presentation of consent and offering without pushing and accepting ānoā however it is worded.
Ā No matter how much he wanted to slide his hand between Kurenaiās thighs, or wind his fingers through Genmaās hair to anchor his head for a kiss, he was not going to be the colossal screw up who destroyed a shipping line, lost a subordinate, and fucked his own team in the space of three months.
So to use Raidouās words: Point. And his thoughts: Hot!
Ā Raidou addressed Kurenai. āHow upset do you think Hatake would be if we drowned him?ā
You know what is worrisome? Pakkun is one of the characters I so TOTALLY can relate to. And now Raidou wants to drown me⦠aaahhh life is not fair
Ā āThe girl who spends half her time following Tousaki around like a pet? Yeah, sheās a genius.ā
See? Totally relatable
Ā āI mean, how much difference does it make knowing that His Testicle Lordship is fourteen-thousand or old as balls?ā
xDDD No further explanation needed
Ā āOr is there an essential Pugness, and youāre its ideal?ā Pakkun gave a shout of laughter, something almost human and almost howling, undercut by a baritone rumble. āI am the pug,ā he cackled. āAll lesser pugs yield before me.ā
The Essential Pugness named Pakkun
Raidou, content with his place in the universe ā multiverse? ā as someone designed to hit things really hard until they couldnāt hit back, gave an eloquent shrug.
Snickering
Ā Raidou rubbed a hand over his face. āDonāt even say it. We donāt need another
complication.ā Kurenai was starting to look amused. āYou could go interrupt this ādeep important conversationā and find out.ā
āOr I could drown myself,ā Raidou grumbled. āThat would be equally fun.ā
Oh how it feels to read this while already knowing the next chapter⦠I know something that you donāt lalalalalaā¦. Also I canāt help but notice that Raidou has a unhealthy obsession with drowning xD
Ā āYondaime-sama was the one who put them on this team together,ā Genma said reasonably. āI doubt he did it blindly.ā
Pakkun floated out to the center of the pool, still lying on his back. āNext time I see him, Iāll tell him you think heās trying to get the kid laid.ā Genma actually slapped a hand over his face. āThatās not what I said.ā āIt was underneath,ā Pakkun said happily.
I am laughin so hard. Oh I love you Pakkun! Pour Genma now having to fear a VERY embarrassing talk with the hottest Kage ever :D:D
What else is there to say? As always so so fantastic writing! Thank you my most favourite authors ever!!!!!!
















