I did read the other translation, all because the caps were splashed over twitter -sigh - but kept scratching my head. The whole Miyas joke about Atsumu getting annoyed because no one considered his feelings was lost. Also - side note - I liked how you had Tanaka saying ‘idiots’ rather than ‘morons’ because moron is a word I associate with Aran talking about the twins, and it goes to characterisation (this is the fanficcer in me - ha). Anyway, your translations are the best so thank you!
I actually think the word aran uses really is different to what tanaka used! the kansai folk use the word ‘aho’ a lot for ‘idiot’, it’s something friends say to each other a lot. Tanaka used ‘baka’, which is the word most people know to be ‘idiot’, but aho is a lot softer amongst kansai folk and baka less so, and the other way around for the kantou folk hahaha. :D I must have subconciously gone with a different word for similar reasons to you!!! like , wait, morons - that’s the word i used for aho - LOL didn’t even realise, glad it turned out well!
One other thing is, Tsukishima says, ‘so BE THERE’, but the other translation had hinata saying ‘I’m here’, it’s not even Hinata’s dialogue though sigh : /// i think tsukishima saying ‘be there’ is more meaningful, it has a lot more oomph to it - anyway idk why i’m advocating this i just translated it the way the raws said lolol
idk how to express how much i love you for existing i should just lie down and cry happily for a while
