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This is my first fanfic EVER - so please be nice.

Naruto world - KakaSaku.

Do not own Naruto or anything.

Enjoy and let me  know how you’ve liked it. :)

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Kakashi was on his way back home after a long mission. In fact, he had done much longer missions than this one, but this time it felt like he have been away from home for ages. Home. The sound of this one small words held so much more meaning for him now than it ever did. Home used to be just his small one-room apartment at the outskirts of Konoha, were he slept casually and kept his few belongings. He moved there soon after that fateful night, in which his father has left him alone. He didn’t even make many changes there since he has moved in. He eventually bought a new couch and some small pillows for his precious dogs to sleep on, but the rest he kept pretty much the same as it was from the day he moved in.

Many years he came back to these empty rooms, filled with nothing but darkness and loneliness. To be honest, he didn’t even mind pretty much – it was just the way it always have been for a very long time. Most times, he didn’t even bothered to use the kitchen. Either he went to Ichiraku’s with his team or grabed some take-away from one of the many restaurants in town.

But this time it was different. He didn’t took the usual way to his small apartment – because it was not his small apartment anymore. He sold it some weeks ago. He sold it because he moved. He moved in a bigger apartment downtown. He also got himself a roommate, which he liked to say. But said roommate was not anyone – it was the one person, who brought the light into his darkness and had managed to fill his heart with something he still cannot understand fully. This person slowly grew on to him, without him noticing. He did not even realize just how much she means to him until he had almost lost her. She was so close to death when she was brought back to the village after her mission failed. Thank Kami her shishou Lady Tsunade was in town to heal her – he doesn’t want to think of what would have happened, if the former Hokage has left Konoha  a few days earlier to continue her travels throught the Fire Country. He stayed at her side the whole time, even though he hates hospitals above anything else. He held her hand while she was unconscious. He watched her. All the time. It felt like he just SAW her know for the first time. That was not the girl he trained for some years. This was a woman now. A strong, beautiful and most kind woman. No, she was even more. She was the woman he loved. Unconditionally. He laughed at himself for being so stupid. How could he only realize that fact just now? Thinking back at the last few years he recognized the small gestures she did. The ones which implied that she also felt more for him. He was just too consumed in his own darkness to realize it. And now it could have been too late. It almost has been. As he was caught in his own thoughts he brought up his hands to her face only to let the tips of his fingers touch her cheeks slightly. He let his hand travel down her neck, her shoulder and her arm to find his fingers entwined with hers. “Please, if there is any God – let her wake. Just let her wake up and let me look into her eyes one more time. Give me the chance to tell her how I feel.”

As he mumbled his short prayer he did not notice that Sakura stirred under his touch and that she opened her eyes just a little bit. She went still as soon as she noticed that someone was holding her hand. Then she heard his voice. A voice she would recognizes anytime. “Ka… Kakashi?” He almost jumped by the sound of her voice. “Yes.. yes it’s me. You.. You’re awake.” That was all he could manage to say at that moment. “I am.” He smiled. He just looked at her and smiled. She was still weak and very sleepy but she smiled back at him. His heart felt like it would burst in that moment. “You’re awake. You came back to me.” Her smile widened as she heard his words. No longer able to keep her eyes open, she just closed them again and was almost again at the edge of sleep when she felt something brushing her lips. She opened them again only to find two orbit eyes filled with nothing but love looking back at her. This time he kissed her, she returned the gesture. She knew that this was the start of something good.

Almost one year has passed since then. They started to go out on dates. Kissed more. Did more than kissing. Fell in love with each other more and more every day. Until Sakura asked Kakashi to move in with her. At first he didn’t knew how to react – but when he looked into her emerald eyes, he knew the answer. “Yes.” So they searched for a nice apartment big enough for both of them and his pack.

I have been mulling around this crazy idea in my head for Generation 8...and I really would love some feedback as to how you, my followers feel about this direction I may take from this point until the end of the legacy....

This is just a thought right now, and not even sure if I will do it, as it will take quite a bit of work, but what if....in another time and place, Nico’s boyfriend Shane would not have died? Then He & Nico went home and reunited with his Nico’s mother, and then Nico, Shane and Willow moved back to Willow Creek and opened a motel at the location where Willow’s ex girlfriend was working??

And then, what if?....One night while Nico was drunk, he and Willow had sex, and Thymian was conceived...

Like if they were for free

Stealing dancing, drinking shots

My world was you and me

Time used to be by our side

Maybe I got too self-centered

And this is just the hard way

To learn a life long lesson

I haven't seen you in a while

And even if I did

We would be like strangers

walking down the streets

When the trust is broken

It can't be unbroken

It can't be fixed

I keep on over-analyzing.

Not one or twice but milion times

And I end up feeling paralyzed.