I really did love this one, and I had fun the entire time - arguably even more than book one.
But once again, it felt like a fantasy variety pack, with new elements popping up out of nowhere. And that ending? We’re just twisting to twist now.
I really truly- like honestly wtf was that cliffhanger. I'm not against it as a whole, except we "learned" things about his father several times throughout this book!
So not only did we just randomly introduce new ideas and shit about Kingfisher's father throughout the book, BUT IT WAS JUST FALSE. CAUSE APPARENTLY HE IS DRAGONBORN? ISN'T THAT WHAT IS IMPLIED BY THIS CLIFFHANGER?
And yeah- now we are just in it with witches and sigils, dragons, a rotting plague with unkillable monsters. Vampire cures. Like if I really think about it, was it REALLY that many things? Maybe not- but it wasn't introduced correctly. IDK how it could be fixed, but the plot or writing just is not correct. I can't properly articulate why, it just isn't it.
The end really hijacked my thoughts. Lets return back to my thoughts that occurred throughout the book. Dual POV? IDK. The beginning of the book would've been really boring without Kingfisher's POV, but at the same time now we've ruined all the mystery.
And we also created a knowledge gap, where we learned things as the reader from Kingfisher's perspective, but then Saeris gets surprised later. And then I have to double take, like I thought Saeris knew? Nope I guess that was Fisher's POV? IDK. Not great but not the worst.
They had me going with Archer's near-death. And IDK, I feel like Onyx should've died. Where are the consequences here. I guess Everlayne is still unconscious, and possibly unsaveable. I am also really interested in Taledius and his arc. That was probably one of my favorite side plot happenings. I also like the ancient thing that is following Saeris, the.. Havrick? Haxv.. yup.
EDIT: I think I figured out how to articulate exactly what is wrong. The books feel like they are plotted as they go. They don't feel well thought out- like when new things get introduced, it doesn't feel grounded. As if it were a sudden idea to be added, rather than planned from the beginning. I don't necessarily think all books/series need to be plotted so far in advance, but with how often they try to reference or allude to things in the past, I wish they appeared more intentional.
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I don't hate it, but I feel like I am just rolling my eyes at every new-
-thing this book introduces. I simultaneously hate and love the fact that Kingfisher has a true name and we found it. But also, like it feels so weird to just call him it all of a sudden. But at the same time it makes so much sense to do so.
I honestly don't know what it is, but the plot line just doesn't feel cohesive. Don't get me wrong, I am having so much fun and enjoying every bit of what is happening - but at the same time, it feels like a whole lot mixed up in a bowl. Or like an infinite stew. Adding more of whatever we got, just to spice it up when we get bored.
It's like Saeris is trying to piss me off. We really used the rune-
-to save Onyx? A very important rune, gifted to us by a fucking ancient powerful being, that could undo ANYTHING FROM OATHS TO DOORS, TO FUCKING POWERFUL WITCH SIGILS? I LOVE ONYX AND WAS SAD TO SEE HIM GO, BUT LIKE... HELLO????? WTFFFF, DO WE WANT TO SAVE THE REALM OR NOT !!!!!
Okay, thank the gods. Chapter 32 into 33 had me fucked up. I really though Saeris-
-had fucked everything up. I was like girl, you had one fucking job. Don't tell Fisher about the book. It is literally the answer to the spreading rot, and she risked everything by telling him.
THANK THE GODS, FISHER'S MOM IS GOOD AT HER JOB. She's like Fisher, your girlfriend is going to be fucking stupid and show you the goddamn book anyway. GIVE IT BACK.
Jesus fucking christ, I was freaking out for a bit.
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Great- spicy scene, fantastic BUT HOLY FUCK LMAOO I AM LAUGHING MY ASS OFF-
INCREDIBLE! WHY DID THEY BOTH JUST SAY YOU FEEL INCREDIBLE, YOU TASTE INCREDIBLE. WHY ARE THEIR EXCLAMATION POINTS LMAO!!!!!!!!
My brain just immediately goes like stereotypical anime male, "Fuck! You taste incredible!" like EUREKA MOMENT. Omg I am dying, I am not reading this correctly.
EDIT: Omg I posted too soon. I kept reading, and now he just made her pass out. How is this the sexiest and least sexiest spice scene I have ever read.