#emberwisp

Disclaimer: I edited this because I hate the old one now lol

This is of a kinda recent oc I made, Robinpaw. Long ago, when he was maybe a few moons away from becoming a warrior, dogs raided the camp and murdered many of the cats - including Emberwisp (his mother), Sleetfur (his father) and Pebblekit (barely-able-to-talk kit). Finding the bodies of his family destroyed Robinkit in a way that couldn’t truly be replicated. He was filled with rage and vengeance, now acting rudely and violent to any who dared to speak to him.

He blames Starclan, the Dark Forest, everything - including himself. A few moons later, Robinpaw was apprenticed to Owlgaze. He was great at fighting, of course, but his rage kept him from believing he needed any more training. He was reckless, easily earning scars with his bravery - or impatience.

Time passed, and Robinpaw grew more experienced, now knowing how to dodge more frequently and how to catch birds. His greatest test was about to begin - a patrol to Sunningrocks. His first patrol! He was eager, genuine, not-angrily excited for the first time in moons. When Thunderclan arrived to the Sunningrocks, they only found Riverclan sitting upon them, bathing in the sun. A few minutes later, a fight broke out. Robinpaw clawed his way through them, until he and the rest of his patrol managed to chase them out. Quite frankly, Robinpaw was excited.

But as they returned to camp, Darkflash, the deputy, had ignored his actions, instead claiming that Robinpaw had done nothing in the battle.

Robinpaw and Darkflash argued for a brief few moments, the clan trying to break them up, until the warrior made a rather mean comment about the apprentice’s family.

Robinpaw snapped, and lashed out - ripping open his throat.

His clanmates reeled back in shock and disgust as Darkflash writhed on the ground, pressing his paws against his neck, gurgling and gagging. Ambersky, their medicine cat, rushed to his side, trying to treat the wound. The younger tom just stared, breath heaving and heart racing.

Strangely, he felt no regrets.

After Barkstar had sent him to rest outside to decide what to do about this incident, he felt a voice ripple in his head. “You have done well. Your family must be avenged. You mustn’t let anyone stand in your way.”

Believing this to be another voice in his head, his head lowered and his eyes narrowed. His determination was set. He stomped out of his nest, and left for the animal that had taken his family.

Another apprentice watched him leave - Echopaw - and quickly chased after him, asking where he was going. Robinpaw just hissed that he was going to get his redemption, and Echopaw got what he was trying to say.

“Robinpaw! Y-you won’t be able to - that dog will-“

He spun around and ripped open her throat, like he had done with Darkflash.

Echopaw reacted similarly, clawing at her wound, but unfortunately had nobody to mourn her as she bled out onto the grass. Robinpaw just stared, and after a few moments, left.

He would not give in.

He would not rest until his rage was fulfilled.

And so, Robinpaw fought. He fought through all the prey and plants and unfortunate, unexperienced cats until he reached his destination.