Hii! I just read chapter 2 of your yandere Aizawa fic and honestly I rally enjoyed the dynamic in this chapter! I think it’s very interesting that darling (us? Idk but I think that is the term) had a delayed response to the kidnapping instead of an instant one. I also liked that in this chapter we can see how the darling struggles with their own emotions and has a conflict within. I haven’t read the other two chapters mainly because I wanna pace myself but it’s sooo good so far that I’m fighting demons not to binge the next chapters. I think that if you ever get stuck in a writer’s block while writing, you should definitely revisit darling’s internal conflict and maybe even have a chapter that focuses on interiority. (I am not in any way trying to tell you how to write your story, I wouldn’t dream of it, this is only a suggestion!)
Thank you for this delicious food (series) and I can’t wait to see where it goes! :D
I'm so glad that you've liked Kitten so far! I hope that you enjoy the rest when you get to reading it, and I appreciate your suggestions!
I already have a pretty good idea of what I will be doing for the next chapter, a lil bit of inner turmoil, a lil bit of fluff. I'll definitely keep in mind revisiting internal conflict for later, if I decide that it feels right.
