#cielxoc

ARG!!! WHAT IS THAT I SEE IN THE DISTANCE!? *looks through telescope*  HOIST THE SAILS, LIFT THE ANCHOR, NOTIFY THE READERS! IT IS A NEW CHAPTER!

Parrot: disestablishmentarianism is used to control the masses--

me: wait what?

Parrot: *SQUACK*

My lovely friend drew this AMAZING DRAWING of Elsie and i’m in love with it!!!! Her art breaths so much life and i’m just at a loss for words fgdfgdfg I can’t stop staring at it ahhhhhh XDDD 

Please check out Tiff’s deviantart (she’s doing commissions!!) https://www.deviantart.com/taripaladiknight

Me, writing ch 12′s Ciel and Elizabeth’s ‘cordial’ scene: 

Is sending a link legit? This is so sue and freaking bad/insensitive/stupid/illogical in general I just

Sorry, had to delete the link, didn't want a sudden wildfire on the creator's page. :)

Well, let's start from the beginning. I'm already feeling oddly cynical.

Name: Hazel Nightingale

Let's start with the outfit, hm? First, too much upper limb. I conveniently can't see how long the dress is, but I'm fairly certain it doesn't go down to her ankles. I don't believe bangs were a thing back then, either.

Race: Human & Demon *Waits for a tale of dead parents and a great deal of unnecessary murder.*

Gender: Female

Birthdate: dec. 20 1875

Age: 12-13

Height: 151 cm

4'11 or so for my American friends.

Eyes: Sapphire blue

Hair: Brown

Sorry, me being picky for a second. Without the historically inaccurate picture, I'd have no clue what she looks like. I'm not talking about purple prose and that sort of thing, but maybe something like, I dunno, "Hair: Brown, and an ideal nest for rats." That tells me a bit more about how her hair actually looks. Kind of fluffy, soft, but all tangled up and probably frizzy. Not really a Sue-ism, but I'm picky.

Personality:quiet,kind,caring,smart, serious at times, outgoing, loyal, fun-loving,bubbly, well-mannered and can be mean when needed.

Okay, let's start from the beginning. One, everyone is serious at times. Everyone has their own little triggers that garner that reaction. That description isn't helpful. Something like, "Hazel is brought back down to Earth when she feels violated or under questioning" would be more helpful. Now I know that Hazel is secretive, and is very sensitive to the way people treat her. I also know that she is usually relaxed and lets her hair down at almost every other time. It's the same thing with "mean when needed". Even I can get a little feisty. Again, "Hazel gets defensive and irritable when her weight is brought up with little discretion" or "Hazel gets testy when people make racist remarks" are much more useful and informative. Oh! Almost left out fun-loving. Okay, what does Hazel consider fun? Reading? Writing? Mountain climbing? Tell me about that!

Likes:singing,dancing,blue roses, playing flute, piano, and violin, drinking tea, writing, drawing, watering plants, sweet aroma's and going for a walk.

I still feel like I know nothing about Hazel. Add all the fun facts you want to, I don't understand her. She's a singer, right? What inspires her? Blue roses? (Brownie points to anyone who writes a song about blue roses.) What does she like talking about? If I were to look at just this and try to find out what I could, I'd assume she was a homebody who preferred to stay in her room doing musical and literary things, and end the day with a mug of tea. How interesting is this person? Really think about that one.

Dislikes:insects, rodents,lightning, fire, horrible aroma's, people who messes up, disgusting foods.

You dislike those? Me, too! So does everyone else on Earth. Tell me about things that people do or say that makes you lose your cool. Talk about the pet peeves and the things that would make you hate a person forever. I don't know this character, I only know things about her.

Bio: is ciel and elizabeth's childhood friend she moved to america with her parents.

Very...insightful.

Crush: Ciel

...

*Buries head in hands.*

Well, see ya round, and keep submitting, my pretties!

Name- Alexandria Eve Ross

This is an acceptable name.

Nckname- Alex or Rose (because for some reason she has a love for flowers, like most girls) 

I wouldn't advise against having her being referred to Rose. Most people aren't given nicknames by what they like. Also, I'd pick a more feminine version of Alex for a nickname, but that is a suggestion.