I don't mind the final design, but I preferred them to look like Donnie said what species of turtles they came from in "never say Xever" (Well, besides Raphael, he has a different look, which I picked up by chance).
Tagging: All the brothers have brown or light-brown eyes to accurately convey their blood relation with Splinter.
When I see their faces without masks, they seemed like blind kittens to me, and after embellishing their faces a little, it didn't feel so much like something was missing.
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Hi! I've been wanting to publish a tmnt rewrite post for a long time about what if April's "Half Kraang" arc had lasted a little longer and how will she walk the path after "The Kraang Conspiracy" episode. You, as a writer, I'd like to hear your version of how she would deal with such news rather than accept too quickly that she has been lied to throughout her life.
I'll definitely credit you as an author if I take some of your thoughts in my future post.
Thank you in advance if you read it ^^
Ooo! Yeah, I've been thinking about this too actually. In the 2012 series April seems to accept the fact she's a mutant way too quickly. I wanted to see her come to terms with it, explore how she and others (her dad specifically) feel about it and when did she fully embrace it.
April seems genuinely shocked, scared, like her whole life has been a lie, when first learning she's a mutant and rightfully so, but then the episode ends. After that reveal, she just moves on with her life, not really talking about it and showing concern about her new found identity.
The very next episode is the Fungus Humgus episode so I think it would've been a good start to explore her identity crisis. Maybe instead of the fear she's seeing being her dad as a bat trying to eat her (which can still be included) its her seeing herself transform into a Kraang like monster. Indirectly showing the audience that she's scare and confused, unsure of what exactly she is: "Am I human or a Kraang?! Why and how did this happen to me?! What am I??!!!"
I feel it would also be a good moment for her to talk with Splinter, since he's the only human turned mutant she knows (at this point) who can enlighten her on what it was like, feeling his body change and move into something else entirely, and how he came to accept his new life as a mutant. I think Splinter would admit to April he hasn't fully adjust to his new rat body and there are times he hates what he sees when looking into a mirror, but it's his sons are the ones who keep him going and appreciate the life he has now. It would also be a good bonding moment for her and Splinter, which we needed more of.
I remember one time I made a Tiktok a LONG time ago that basically went like;
Casey: You didn't say your friends are mutants!
April: What's wrong with that?
Casey: Mutants are dangerous!
April, shocked and hurt: I'm a mutant...
So April would have moments like that where she's conflicted with mutant subjects. She's not human enough to be considered "normal" but she doesn't look mutant enough to be with them. She'd torn between two worlds and neither will accept her (cause it's established in later season that some mutants HATE humans: Punks Frogs, Alopex, etc.)
I feel there was also a missed opportunity for April to discuss this with her dad. Kirby must have SOME KNOWLEDGE about April's Kraang origin because he was LITERALLY THERE WHEN THE KRAANG TRIED TO CAPTURE HIS DAUGHTER BUT GOT HIS WIFE INSTEAD!!! (i'll get to more of that later)
The April's mom episode will also really take a toll on her, seeing that Kraang creature and fearing that is what she truly is on the inside. She has seen what she is capable of by this point and I think it would've been interesting to maybe have an episode during the farmhouse arc where April goes away for a bit, scared she'll hurt her friends until Raph is the one who finds her. He'd open up to her and tell her that while he won't understand what she'd going through, he knows he fear she has of hurting loved ones. This would also give a good April and Raph bonding moment of his sharing with her his fear of letting his anger getting the better of him that he harm hurt his brothers. Raph's words will give April the courage to go back the farmhouse.
I've always stood by the concept of April getting more Kraang features the more she begins to embrace and understand her powers. For me, it would start with April having green eyes instead of blue for the entire show (her mom has green eyes and so do the Kraang, subtly foreshadowing, you know?). Then after the season 3 finale, that's when things get crazy.
This moment is when April's Kraang side will really show. After April's freak out of Splinter's death, 6 long skinny pink tentacles will sprout from the back of her neck, pink antennas pop from the top of her head, she eyes glow full green. This is April's new look for the rest of the series. She can easily retracked them but whenever she's feeling intense emotion or even during combat, they sprout out and assist her. I can even imagine her using the tentacles to help her hold things lol.
Once April is in space, that is when she truly comes to love and embrace her Kraang mutant side. Being in space was like a self discovery journey. I feel her befriending and training with Fugitoid would help her embrace that side of her. Fugitoid would train her to properly control her powers, making her comfortable with her Kraang features being out (note: beginning of space arc she'd hide them in shame for looking like the enemy, Mikey thinks they're cool and wants to test them, but the Turtles tell him to give her space and let her adjust). The Utrom Council could also play a role in April learning more about her Kraang side, or even her mother's origin. By the end of the Space arc April would fully embrace her Kraang features and show them off with pride. This will lead to conflict with her father later in season 4.
Side note: I'd also like to add the concept of April befriending Mona Lisa and her being the one to give her ideas of how to fight with her Kraang tentacles, since Mona fights with her tail. Just a cute idea lol
April would finally confront her father about their family connection with the Kraang after returning from space, and it's reveal Kirby has always known she was a mutant Kraang, and her mother had ties with them. He just never wanted to tell her and hoped the Kraang would never find them. He never wanted that side of his daughter to come out, after all he's been through with losing his wife, he feard this Kraang side of his daughter would make him lose her too.
Spoilers for Kpop Demon Hunters, but it will be like the scene when Rumi confronted Celine for making her cover up her demon patterns;
April: Why can't you love me?!
Kirby: I do!
April, Kraang side coming out, full of rage: ALL OF ME!!
This drama would also tie into The Power Inside Her episode (which btw would've been a good season finale after all that build up). I don't know fully how it would play out, but her dad will play a big part in the whole Za-Naron situation. It will end with Kirby finally realizing he's fear is pushing his daughter away and he accepts her for who she is fully and is supportive from there on out.
But those are just a couple of ideas I have for this concept! I hope you like them and I cna't wait to see what you'll do with them! Feel free to add your own creative ideas too :D
Hi, I just wanted to say something about my impressions of your rewriting and ask for permission:
So let's start: I was surprised by your rewriting and even liked some of them (like Irma, Shinigami and, what I admire more, fixing Apritello). This change in the canon does something new and makes you wonder what if the writers would have done so. But I want to touch more on the topic of fixing Apritello (because why am I writing this)
Your version of the attitude just makes me believe that not everything is so bad with the ship (well, only in the canon of course). And also your fan fictions helps these two to feel real feelings. Perhaps this version of the "friends to lovers" trope could fix all the negativity to the ship. After all, if you think about it, then this ship was shown more in the show, and Ramona and Renetangelo only rarely appeared (and these are the only healthy couples in the series). Renet and Mona were like minor characters, and Donnie and April were the main characters. so, these two were developed more (but, as you know, the scriptwriters did not succeed very well).
So, thank you for letting me really fall in love with these two💜💛
About permission, just in case: Can I take your idea of «fixing Apritello» and some of your rewriting and turn it into fan fiction or a comic?
If something is wrong with the text, then I use a translator(English is not my native language).
I’d be honored if you turned my Apritello rewrite into a fanfic/comic! You have my permission! That would be awesome! 🤩
All I ask in return is for you to tag me and give me proper credit for the rewrite/inspiration when you pay it please🙏
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