#chasing ghosts

The first chapter of Changing Ghosts was so intriguing. I think you set the scene well with the male OC and the worldbuilding. Looking forward to learn about his motivation in regards to Yunjin and her feelings and thoughts as well.

Excited to see how the story develops.

Hi Tyranny,

Thanks! Honestly I feel like the start is still the weakest part of the story so far, because it’s all about combining the start of a story with the heat of a scene, and it’s not really easy to do that. But then again, I felt like the story was always meant to start at that bar.

And it was also about accepting and appreciating the rough edges. Some portions I like, and some I don’t. It’s natural. It’s learning to post even when I feel like it should be rewritten. MC and Yunjin might be blank and one note, but I want to unravel them slowly, giving time to explore the depths of their characters, like how knowing people in real life works.

There’s so much more beneath the surface. With the characters, their motivations, the world. And I hope I can make you guys as excited as I am to see each subsequent chapter. I’d love to hear more from my audience. What can’t you wait to see? Did anything stand out? Can you already guess where this is headed? And, of course, what do you think could have been improved?

Much love Tyranny, and all those who bought tickets for the ride.

Anti

Ever the romantic, Janet lives vicariously through the love songs she hears on the radio.