#but the writing...

They really wasted so many opportunities with all they could’ve done with Malilandon. One of them being to have Landon and Malivore interacting with each other in their mind. They could’ve had Landon fighting to gain back control of his body and visually show what’s happening mentally with him and Malivore physically fighting each other inside their mind, like Katherine and Elena. What a waste.

This is probably a very unpopular opinion on the clone wars but the Umbara arc was really not all that

I always thought that I didn't care much from the style of writing in a book or the prose w.e you call it but I do now think that it makes such a massive difference

to be completely honest, I feel like my angst fic would be better if I handed to someone who will know what to do with them, than to write it myself