First 250 Words Smash! #52
Most Wonderful Author: M. Halter Most Evil Critique Master: Katie Working Title: N/A
Pain drove Shannon to her knees. One hand pressed to the grit of the floor, the other clapped against bruised ribs, fingers inspecting the rungs woven through her left lung where, deep within, the impeller of a pneumatic pump struggled to turn. Don’t cough…don’t— Stars swarmed her vision before she was through, and a nudging at the shutters again slammed the morning into focus. She grabbed the black-headed spear and unlatched the window, piebald head of a stallion barreling through, nostrils flared, ears thrust forward. Her soft laugh was a small victory. “Ready, Atticus?” They sighed as one, leaning against each other in wan light before he danced away and she followed, pulling low the brim of her shabby felt hat. By nightfall, their fields lay far behind them.
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