Aug 4
poor writers I beta read for. If things keep going this way, they'll have to tag "no beta we die like the original beta reader"
That's one of the reasons I'm trying to calm down and not attempt something messed up
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poor writers I beta read for. If things keep going this way, they'll have to tag "no beta we die like the original beta reader"
That's one of the reasons I'm trying to calm down and not attempt something messed up
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iām gonna start keeping a list of books where i predicted a way cooler & more appropriate ending than they had.
so far itās just tobacco stained mountain goat (his wife should have been turned into bioplastic!)Ā and this book I currently havenāt quite finished but in my version, the mastermind planned for himself to be the human sacrifice.
Iād be interested to read if you need help!
I admit Iām not in the Castlevania fandom, but if you really do want a beta and no one else offers I could do itš
I felt that sksnsk, thank you! I think I scaried most of my Castlevania fans with that one post about basically copying and pasting asks oop- but Iāll offer it to you once I finish! Just let me know if you change your mind! It 100% will not offend me if you do. Thank you v much I am anxious so I definitely think a beta reader would help!
I have so much less feedback to give than the person I did my beta swap with. I can see a perspective from which thatās a good thing but ! I wanna do good feedback!
honestly this book should count for at least 3 books read this year bc my brain is so so so tired. 24 A4 pages left. i finally am able to tell you what the plot is, though iām still not certain whose side we are on.
(obviously i am on the side of snakeman and his undead robot wife, but like. whether they are good guys or bad guys i couldnāt tell you. the protagonist doesnātĀ āātrustāā the undead robot wife because sheās omniscient and wants to take control of the city, from people who are definitely the villains but its like, does that mean we should give control to an omniscient dead lady controlling a million carcass beatles? yes, it does.)
iām definitely gonna have to ask this guy what exactly he wants feedback on because itās like. thereās A LOT i could say on different levels. He thinks the book is more finished than I think it is, and for a given audience he may be right. I want to tell himĀ āYou need to make this less confusingā but that is such an enormous ask Iām not sure itās fair feedback to give.
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