#beneathrpg

THEME & COLOURS → 8/10

At first glance the roleplay looks good and I love the theme. It's one of my favorites, actually. I like the blue and green colors. I think they mix well together and the text is easy to read. Maybe make the sidebar description's text a little bigger? I can read it but it might be a little hard for other people to read. But other than that, it looks good. 

ORGANIZATION → 5/5

Your roleplay is very organized! I can tell you've put a lot of effort into it and, for me, I can always appreciate a hard working admin when it comes to joining a roleplay group. Your navigation, for example, is very detailed and easy to navigate. It looks great, too. I like how you've categorized your character masterlist. The character bios are very detailed and gives the person auditioning a lot of insight about their character.

RULES/AUDITION FORM→ 5/5

I've said it before and I'll say it again, everything about your roleplay just screams "organized" and "detailed." Just with one glance, I can already tell your rules are well thought and well written. After reading through them, I can confirm my earlier assumptions were correct. 

Audition form looks good. Everything that's needed, you've included.

ROLEPLAY PLOT→ 4/5

The idea of the plot is common as I've seen similar ones before but it's clear yours is something you've took time into thinking about and writing. You've presented your plot well and it certainly grasps my attention.

WOULD I JOIN?

Yes, I would. The graphics, theme, plot, and organization alone pull me in. If I didn't have such a tight schedule, I'd certainly audition.  

First impression and main page:

I really like your main page, you've got everything there. Your navigation and description are very easy to spot, which I really like - those are generally the two things I look to, when applying somewhere.

Theme and aesthetics:

I like the theme, I love that your gifs fades into the description bar colour - effortlessly, I must add. It looks put together. I'm being nit picky now, but I'm not really a fan of the white on green sidebar. It's not horrible, I'm just not a fan of white text on such a pastel green. Apart from that, everything looks great. I love the neat navigation and characters page.

Plot:

I really like your plot, you clearly outline the two groups. I've seen a few places that mention it and have it as another link to go read about them at and I'm not a fan of it. I don't like having to switch between tabs, so brownie points on covering all necessary points in the plot.

Characters and biographies:

The graphics look great, they are simple and are uniform to your theme. I think it's awesome that you've a variety of types of face-claims. Your biographies have a great layout, you have everything from past to connections - so it shows that you've actually put a lot of thought into these characters and that is something that really pulls me in.

Rules:

Your rules are nice and to the point, everything a decent roleplay needs from their players. However, I would recommend linking a tutorial on post-cutting, just because there are usually applicants that haven't roleplayed on tumblr before and it saves you time from having to call people out on the dash and no one will have the excuse of not knowing how to cut posts. 

Application form:

You've made the application very easy for people to fill out. Any questions that I would potentially have are answered, so awesome job on those.

Conclusion: