#beneathrpg

First impression and main page:

I really like your main page, you've got everything there. Your navigation and description are very easy to spot, which I really like - those are generally the two things I look to, when applying somewhere.

Theme and aesthetics:

I like the theme, I love that your gifs fades into the description bar colour - effortlessly, I must add. It looks put together. I'm being nit picky now, but I'm not really a fan of the white on green sidebar. It's not horrible, I'm just not a fan of white text on such a pastel green. Apart from that, everything looks great. I love the neat navigation and characters page.

Plot:

I really like your plot, you clearly outline the two groups. I've seen a few places that mention it and have it as another link to go read about them at and I'm not a fan of it. I don't like having to switch between tabs, so brownie points on covering all necessary points in the plot.

Characters and biographies:

The graphics look great, they are simple and are uniform to your theme. I think it's awesome that you've a variety of types of face-claims. Your biographies have a great layout, you have everything from past to connections - so it shows that you've actually put a lot of thought into these characters and that is something that really pulls me in.

Rules:

Your rules are nice and to the point, everything a decent roleplay needs from their players. However, I would recommend linking a tutorial on post-cutting, just because there are usually applicants that haven't roleplayed on tumblr before and it saves you time from having to call people out on the dash and no one will have the excuse of not knowing how to cut posts. 

Application form:

You've made the application very easy for people to fill out. Any questions that I would potentially have are answered, so awesome job on those.

Conclusion: