Magnificent work as always can’t wait for more <3

hey there, baby love!

can i just say- i absolutely adore when people pick out certain lines or scenes from my works and make comments on them. it’s seriously one of my favorite things ever. the line is just so fitting for feyd.

the reader has been carted off to this entirely different planet with the promise of bridging the gap between two long-feuding houses. ahhh!

and that is so cool! i read macbeth in high school and remember genuinely enjoying it.

i also love the phrase “do you yield” that was used with paul while he was training and came into play later on in the first dune film. it can be spun in so many ways with the reader and feyd’s relationship- which is where the whole “submission” subplot is really going to come into play. the reader doesn’t want to submit to the idea of marrying someone she, at the current moment, absolutely detests. she doesn’t want to submit to the harkonnen’s nor does she want to submit to her future husband.