Hiii! I just found this blog and read a bit about the story and... DAMN This looks so beautiful and nostalgic in a way, I hope you don't mind a bit of mumbling but here we go:
I wanted to make this post before starting all the other posts you've published, except for the introduction, to be a little more "objective" about the characters and lore. Maybe I'll do another one later, lol.
Anyway, I'm talking about "beautiful" and nostalgic in a slightly more poetic way, I suppose. As for the way you did the intro, I found it more poetic than the narrative style we're more used to. And yes, please give me more!
In such a short intro, we've been able to see quite a bit of the dynamics between RO and MC. How does the moon seem to be envious or perhaps a little insecure with its counterpart, the sun? At the same time, how does the sun seem to respect them? Or at least admit that they are not stronger/they are equals to MC (its light cannot illuminate MC's night)? Now, we don't know if, as I said before, this is said out of respect (a positive relationship with the sun) or not (enemies to lovers, who?).
The way you've portrayed the friendship between the sea and the moon is so beautiful. Especially when you play with how the moon attracts the tide, so these two being besties is just *chef kiss*
But I'm really curious about the third RO, ahhhh, could you tell us a little more about them? Wait, no, cross that out, tell us more about all of them please! Their physical appearances, personalities, or the dynamics between them with MC or among themselves (if it's not a spoiler, of course). What will the story be about? Will it be more character-focused or will it have a more intense lore?
Ahhh I can't wait
Hello! First and foremost thank you for the ask :D And I canβt put to words how happy your message makes me feel
I answered an ask on the physical appearance and some backgrounds of the ROs here:
https://www.tumblr.com/and-there-was-the-moon/811100373504917504/hi-can-you-go-into-a-bit-more-detail-about-the?source=share
As for the story itself, it based on the myth of the moon in my larger (and much older) story/project. I sort of started this as a side project and a break from my main story (which may or may not be a IF, I canβt promise that itβs a definite yes tho :/). The myth itself has 3 versions to it (thereβs technically more but I only have 3 drafted ;-;), each version depends on which of the holy books you are reading. As for the writing/storytelling of this short-IF would switch between the usual third person writing style and the more poetic style used for myths (I fear I am most familiar and comfortable with this style; So itβs gonna be an interesting ride with the former). Will there be sad? The answer is maybe (I do love myself some sad, you have to blame Shakespeare for it.)
As for the dynamic of the Ros, I can say with absolute confidence that the Sun and the Dyingβs dynamic will depend on choices (thereβs some variations, hence why I am cursing out my past self/j) as for the Sea, itβs gonna be some variation of close acquaintance to friend to best friend to lover (the last is only if you want. Cus you in fact can just be single all the way π). I might change some things around, (*laughs nervously at this potential grave I dug for myself) but I will let yall know if I do :D
All the best~
-Stale













