hi so i read your phm fic last night and i woke up this morning still thinking about it and specifically thinking about how eridian!grace didn't have anyone to watch him sleep and that was exploited so he could be kidnapped and put on the ship???? first of all that is such a huge no no for eridians like i had a visceral reaction when i read that part because that's so horrifying. but also human!grace is deemed expendable because he doesn't have any 'immediate family' (read: partner), eridian!grace is more vulnerable because he doesn't have a mate to watch over him which gets taken advantage of, something something people who don't conform to societal expectations of romance are constantly devalued because of it 😭😭😭 i'm rambling. anyway fic great and you preserved the horror and implications of the situation while transposing it to a different context excellently 👍👍👍👍👍
waow omg that is soso kind of u to say!! the parallels between human grace and eridian grace were def my fav parts to come up with, just because there were so many interesting ways to make it work!!
i really liked the horror of stratt drugging grace against his will and wanted to preserve that for sure. and so taking grace during his sleep translated especially well bc of all the connotations eridians have in canon abt how sleep is dangerous and you need to have someone watching u to keep u safe. i think in this au, grace got used to sleeping alone, trusted that the other eridians wouldn't do anything to hurt him while he was unconscious. but he was wrong :(
and and and i loved how not having someone to watch him sleep made him vulnerable! just like how not having a partner or family on earth made him vulnerable to that part of stratt's argument to send him to space! aroace grace is my fav headcanon of him everrrr so including that bit was very important to me!
thank you so very much for this lovely ask! it makes me very very happy to know that you liked my fic :] i really appreciate it when ppl think abt my writing it makes all the thought i put into it feel worth it <3













