Do you have any advice for anyone on how they make their villains in their own fics? you can show some examples so they might get an idea of you want to.
Well, I could give you advice on making āquickā villains, as in villains whose only purpose are to cause the conflict you really want to start, without setting them as a main, continuous villain whose story intertwines with the heroās inseparably. Ā I have more experience with them whether than long-term bad guys. Although, I know you can develop long-term villains this way. Thereās never just ONE way to make a villain.
For me, I like to start with a single scene of conflict. Just one anguished, tragic, or heart-racing scene that I really want to try with no set villain or enemy; the villain is just a faceless shadow or floating idea in the background for now. I think of how I want the scene to play out; what emotions are there from the main characters, whatās the damage done, what are the potential outcomes (Example: -From the first idea of my story, āAnother Reasonā- I want a scene that damages the heroine psychologically, but not permanently. A scene that causes the hero to snap immediately upon witnessing and causes a huge scare for all involved. For this, I chose and so imagined a scene of sexual harassment/assault.)
Based on that central event youāre excited to implement into a story, who would be the perpetrator? What reasons would they have to do this? What kind of behaviors and beliefs would best suit a person who would willingly (or unwillingly if you want to play it that way) cause such a scene? What potential backgrounds can they have that made them like this or put them here in the first place? What are their abilities, strengths, and weaknesses that would help make this scene you picture happen and help its resolution?
You can come up with a number of different versions of your villain trying to answer these questions and more, creating a list of different combinations that you can try out (Example: For the assault, the villain should be attracted to the heroine or be hateful towards her in some way. Villain could be a bandit/criminal who has frequently gotten away with such crimes. Could be a wealthy man used to getting what he wants. Maybe a combination? Is there maybe more than one person causing this conflict? Would it be for their own sexual pleasure or just to torture the heroine? Does the villain(s) know her beforehand: yes or no?).
The consideration strengthens when you have more than one important scene/conflict you want to use in the same story and can actually help narrow down your options. Like, āThis person would do this, but also has to be capable of this and this.ā Youāll have to do the extra work of finding ways to link the events in your story together, along with deciding on the traits of your villain(s), but thatās a good way you can build both the story and the antagonist off of each other, trying your combinations and throwing out the ones that donāt quite fit the way you want them to (or donāt make sense).
Also important: USE REFERENCES. Donāt be afraid to look at and study existing villains from other creators. Read/watch how they act around others, how they react to different situations, even how they walk and talk! There are actually a lot of good villain lists (not just Disney) on YouTube that you can look at for sampling (I actually find lots of new villains to look at through voice acting lists.) The only thing I warn about when doing this is to make sure youāre not making your villain a carbon copy of another existing villain. Make sure to add your own flair or tweaks to him/her/it if you really like another villainās personality and design (Example: The villain I created for āAnother Reasonā was based on the behaviors and tactics of criminals that Iād seen for years portrayed on Law & Order: SVU and criminal investigation shows, not just one person from one of them).
All in all itās really just all brainstorming. Bouncing ideas around and writing down possible scenes and persons to try. Taking what you know, what you want, and what you havenāt considered before and trying out the combinations. Make some rough drafts of your story with some of your best/closest designs of your villain (Like, a sentence or two per scene kind of draft with dialogue here and there).Ā
Making a written bio of your villain also helps you visualize them better and keep their personality consistent in your mind, having a written character log to look back on and edit if need be. There are actually TONS of character templates and forms out there that you can use and fill out to help you decide and cement what your character would be like in your mind (any character, not just villains).
Here is one that I think has plenty of material to use for pinning your character down and I have used it once or twice to get my ideas straight.