Character Introduction: Asbel
Finally, hereâs what I promised: the introduction drabble for Asbel! (my sunshine boyâą) Enjoy!Â
(Land of Hope WIP intro, if youâve forgotten what heâs part of)
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"What? Me? No, no! Not at all!"
Asbel was frantically waving his hands, trying to apologize in front of the merchant who was turning even redder by the second.
"It has to be your fault that my cargo hasn't arrived!" the big man thundered, pushing his finger against the young man's chest. "You were supposed to take care of the message, and the shipment should already be here if you weren't a good-for-nothing fool!
- But I can assure you, it's not my fault! I conveyed your terms to Rolven, she confirmed the deal and that's it! She never mentioned a longer shipping time!
- Oh really? Then what am I supposed to do with my clients that are waiting for their beams? If she needed more time than we agreed, she should have let me know! How do I know you didn't just forget to ask her?
- What? No, not at all! I'm telling you, I told her everything!
- And what about the time you forgot for Garmann's meeting, hm? Or the deal between Vance and Harril? It's not the first time you screw up a mission because you just can't remember what you're told! I don't even know why your father insists on keeping you!
-The mee- But that was- For crying out loud, I swear I didn't forget anything! She didn't say anything! She must have been delayed by the rain! It's not my fault!"
The merchant crossed his arms and glared down at him, frowning.
-"The rain. Whatever. But I'm still the one who's going to be stuck dealing with the angry customers. Let me tell you, the next time you get in the way of my business you can bet that your father will be hearing about you!
-But I didn't-
- Now get out of here! I have better things to do than listening to your whining!"
Asbel clenched his fists, gave him a brief nod and left. Behind him, the man was grudgingly undertaking to scribble something in a ledger already covered in notes.
"Perfect. Another problem. Like I didn't already have the worst record in town." Asbel stepped inside and put his errand bag down. "And one morning wasted!" he muttered, blowing against the blond hair that had strayed out of his braid.
-"So I take it you had problems with Verik?"
Asbel froze, then put his head out through the study door. He sighed, with relief this time.
His sister was seated in front of a sea of files and sheets, her sandy hair pulled in a tight bun. She was staring at him like she was waiting for something, but her eyes shone with an amused light.
-"Hell, you scared me! I thought Dad was here! The later he hears about what happened, the happier I'll beâŠ" he said wearily. He took a few steps in the room and sat on the corner of a table.
-"Did it go that wrong? Verik should have expected delay, the upstream villages have been writing about the bad weather for the last three weeks. He's not the only one who's been having trouble because of it."
Asbel let out a strangled laugh. He was agitated, his legs swinging under the table.
-"If you want to go talk to him, believe me, I won't stop you! But it's so much easier to blame me⊠He even brought up Garmann's meeting! Even though it wasn't even my fault, he's the one who didn't mention he needed a interpreter! And an Ilmani, at that! Not the kind of guy you can find at any turn!"
His sister was staring at him, her gaze inscrutable. His hands fell back to his side.
-"I know that if I keep getting in trouble I'm gonna have to find another job again. But I swear I'm doing my bestâŠ"
His sister kept her gaze on him for a few moments more, then turned back to her desk, straightened up her already perfect pages and picked up the ink reed she had put down.
-"All trade with the villages has been cut for five days. It was time to send some people to see how they are doing and lend them a hand, anyway. I'll try to learn how Rolven's shipment is going, it might calm down Verik's clients." The light scratching of the reed on the paper now seemed to hold all of her attention. Asbel let himself slide from the table, his feet hitting the floor with a muted sound.
-"I⊠Sor- Thanks.
-Dad will surely leave the council late, Verik will have calmed down by then. In the meantime, pass by the archive to see if they need you. There are still people in this town who appreciate your work." Asbel raised his head, hearing the warmth in his sister's voice. She was looking at him again with a slight smirk and one raised eyebrow. He stood a little straighter and smiled at her cheerfully.
-"Well, it's a good thing the most fearsome penpusher in the city has my back! Beware, or she could bury you under paperwork and bills!" The only answer he got was a paper ball shot in his direction as he ducked out towards the exit. He saluted his sister one last time:
-"I'm going to try to make myself useful! See you later!"
Already immersed in her files once more, she waved at him vaguely. He tiptoed out of the house, grabbing his bag on the way.
-"Try to make myself useful. Mmh. Try, that's the word." he muttered, gazing at the city that stretched out before him.
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Thatâs it! It might be a little blunt and pretty unclear, but itâs normal! Iâll probably do more straightforward character presentations one of these days, but this is meant only as a way to introduce my characters in the first chapters.
Youâre free to ask questions if you really want to know more, though! But be aware that this is the very beginning of the novel, so the things you see here are not gonna stay unchanged...
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Iâm adding the French version below for those who might be interested!
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"Quoi? Moi? Non, non! Pas du tout!"
Asbel agitait frénétiquement les mains en signe d'excuse devant le marchand qui empourprait à vue d'oeil.
"Si mon chargement n'est toujours pas arrivĂ©, c'est forcĂ©ment de ta faute! tonitrua le large homme en pressant son doigt contre le torse du jeune homme. C'est toi qui devais te charger du message, et la livraison devrait dĂ©jĂ ĂȘtre lĂ , si tu n'Ă©tais pas un imbĂ©cile bon Ă rien!
-Mais je vous assure que je n'y suis pour rien! J'ai transmis vos termes à Rolven, elle a confirmé l'accord et c'est tout! Elle n'a jamais mentionné un délai de livraison plus long!
-Ah vraiment? Et comment je suis sensĂ© faire, moi, avec mes clients qui attendent leurs poutres? Si elle avait besoin de plus de temps que convenu, elle aurait dĂ» me le faire savoir! Comment je peux ĂȘtre sĂ»r que tu n'as pas juste oubliĂ© de lui en parler?
-Quoi? Mais non, pas du tout! Je vous assure que je lui ai tout dit!
-Et la fois oĂč tu as oubliĂ©  le rendez-vous de Garmann, hein? Et l'accord entre Vance et Harril? C'est pas la premiĂšre fois que tu foires une mission parce que t'es pas fichu de retenir ce qu'on te dit! Je sais mĂȘme pas pourquoi ton pĂšre s'obstine Ă te garder!
-Le ren- Mais c'Ă©tait- Bon sang, je vous jure que je n'ai rien oubliĂ©! Elle ne m'a rien dit! Rien! Elle a dĂ» ĂȘtre retardĂ©e par les pluies! Ce n'est pas de ma faute!" Le marchand croisa les bras et le toisa, les sourcils froncĂ©s.
-"Les pluies. Ouais. En attendant, c'est moi qui vais devoir me coltiner les clients furieux. La prochaine fois que tu me causes des problĂšmes, ton pĂšre entendra parler de toi, tu peux en ĂȘtre sĂ»r!
-Mais je n'ai mĂȘme pas-
-Allez, file de là ! J'ai autre chose à faire que de t'écouter pleurnicher!"
Asbel serra les poings, salua le commerçant d'un signe de tĂȘte et sortit. DerriĂšre lui, l'homme s'attelait en grommelant Ă noircir un peu plus un livre de comptes couvert de notes.
"Parfait. Encore un problÚme. Comme si j'avais pas déjà le pire tableau de chasse de toute la ville." Asbel passa le seuil de la maison et posa son sac de coursier dans l'entrée. "Et une matinée de perdue!" marmonna-t-il, soufflant pour repousser les mÚches blondes qui s'échappaient de sa tresse.
"J'en déduis que tu as eu des problÚmes avec Verik?"
Asbel se figea, puis passa la tĂȘte dans l'encadrement de la porte du bureau et eut un soupir, de soulagement cette fois.
Sa sĆur Ă©tait assise devant une mer de dossiers et de feuilles, ses cheveux sable remontĂ©s en un chignon strict. Elle le fixait, l'air d'attendre quelque chose, mais une lueur d'amusement dansait dans ses yeux.
-"Bon sang, tu m'as fait peur! J'ai cru que Papa était là ! Plus tard il apprendra comment ça s'est fini, mieux je me porterai..." dit-il avec lassitude. Il fit quelques pas dans la piÚce et  sur le coin d'une table.
-"Ăa s'est si mal passĂ© que ça? Verik aurait dĂ» s'attendre Ă du retard, ça fait trois semaines que les villages en amont parlent des intempĂ©ries dans leurs missives. Il n'est pas le seul Ă qui ça cause des problĂšmes."
Asbel eut un rire étranglé. Il était agité, ses jambes se balançant sous la table.
-"Si tu veux aller lui en parler, crois moi, je te retiens pas! Mais c'est tellement plus facile de m'accuser moi... Il a mĂȘme mentionnĂ© le rendez-vous de Garmann! Alors que c'Ă©tait mĂȘme pas de ma faute, c'est lui qui n'a pas prĂ©cisĂ© qu'il lui fallait un interprĂšte! Et un Ilmani en plus! Pas le genre de gars qui se trouve Ă n'importe quel coin de rue!"
Sa sĆur le fixait, son regard indĂ©chiffrable. Ses mains retombĂšrent piteusement Ă ses cĂŽtĂ©s.
-"Je sais bien que si je continue Ă avoir des problĂšmes, je vais encore devoir trouver un autre travail. Mais je fais de mon mieux, je t'assure..."
Les yeux de sa soeur restÚrent posés sur lui quelques instant de plus, puis elle se retourna vers son bureau, remit de l'ordre dans ses feuilles déjà parfaitement ordonnées et reprit le roseau à encre qu'elle avait posé.
-"Tous les Ă©changes avec les villages sont coupĂ©s depuis cinq jours. Il Ă©tait temps d'envoyer quelques personnes jeter un Ćil et leur donner un coup de main, de toute façon. J'en profiterai pour voir oĂč en est Rolven avec la livraison, ça devrait calmer les clients de Verik." Le grattement du roseau sur le papier, lĂ©ger, semblait maintenant attirer toute l'attention de la jeune femme. Asbel se laissa glisser au sol, ses pieds touchant le plancher avec un bruit sourd.
-"Je... Dés- Merci.
- Papa sortira sĂ»rement tard du conseil, Verik sera calmĂ© d'ici lĂ . En attendant, passe voir aux archives si ils ont besoin de toi. Il y a quand mĂȘme des gens dans cette ville qui apprĂ©cient ton travail." La chaleur dans la voix de sa sĆur fit relever la tĂȘte Ă Asbel. Elle le regardait de nouveau, avec un lĂ©ger sourire en coin et un sourcil relevĂ©. Il se redressa un peu et lui sourit joyeusement.
-"Heureusement que la gratte-papier la plus redoutable de toute la citĂ© couvre mes arriĂšres! Prenez garde, elle pourrait vous enterrer sous la paperasse et les livres de comptes!" La seule rĂ©ponse qu'il obtint fut une boulette de papier lancĂ©e dans sa direction tandis qu'il s'esquivait vers la sortie. Il adressa un dernier salut Ă sa sĆur :
-"Je vais essayer de me rendre utile! Ă plus tard!"
Déjà replongée dans ses dossiers, elle lui fit un vague signe de la main. Il quitta la maison sur la pointe des pieds en reprenant sa besace au passage.
"Essayer de me rendre utile. Mmh. Essayer, c'est le mot." marmonna-t-il en regardant la ville qui s'ouvrait devant lui.













