#areafae

I *adore* the way you write how characters observe each other. There’s so many lovely little details, but in this very realistic humanised way. Abolish noticing that Legundo shaved recently, the way Louis noticed Pearl’s sweat and freckles, the entire sequence of Owen *looking* at Legs. It’s all very tender and thoughtful and it adds a richness to the narrative that I love so much.

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Omg thanks so much. I always read other peoples writing, whether it be fic writers, or published authors, and lament every being able to write as well as any of them. But occasionally I get people telling me things like this, that make me think Oh! Maybe you hit that mark yourself sometimes.

I love descriptions. I didn't think I did it abnormally often, until someone pointed out recently that I describe spaces a lot, as well as smells. I have a pretty sensitive nose, it runs in the family, and I am always cognizant of what spaces and people smell like lol.