#anna wallace

>Be the repair girl

[SPRITE COMING EVENTUALLY]

[COLOR=”#B22222”]got it!!![/COLOR]

Your name is [COLOR=”#B22222”]Anna Wallace[/COLOR] and you are a 13 year old living near MAINE

As a child you’ve always had a curious streak in terms of TINKERING WITH MECHANICAL DEVICES. You would disassemble a toaster to see how it worked, or stick a paperclip in an electrical outlet to see the outcome. Some may call that impulsive or perhaps unintelligent, but they just can’t see the big picture! You desperately feel the need to [COLOR=”#B22222”]”experiment and learn as much as you can, because there simply isn’t enough TIME in the world to not take advantage of every opportunity that arises, are you getting this?!”[/COLOR] It helps that your DAD owns a local REPAIR SHOP, you have access to a variety of different tools and plenty of devices to experiment on, which you can stick in your TOOLBOX modus, which cost a bundle but was totally worth it! However to economize on space in your modus you decide to keep your trusty WRENCH in your STRIFE SPECIBUS.

Sounds good so far! She seems like she'd be fun to play/write as and be interesting to rp with as well just due to the tinkering and attempted/fixing of stuff.

That isn’t to say experimenting on mechanical devices is your ONLY interest, you enjoy a good exciting ACTION MOVIE, or equally exciting ANIMATION involving GIANT ROBOTS. You also really enjoy a variety of different video games, mostly ones that are in an OPEN WIDE SANDBOX or encourage EXPLORATION. Of course you also talk to some friends on Pesterchum when you feel like unwinding a bit.

Sounds good as well, a bit short compared to the first part but maybe that's just me. The only thing I suggest for this bit is elaborating on the pesterchum more.

If you were to play a GAME WITH CATACLYSMIC CONSEQUENCES you would be the [COLOR=”#FF0000”]THIEF OF TIME[/COLOR] in the LAND OF TIDES AND TIME

Hm do you mind if I make a suggestion on the Land? Maybe try the land of Tides and Tinkers or Tides and Trash if you want to keep tides. Tinkers/Trash in this case probably being a lot of different broken items and such, maybe even clocks if you want to stick with a time theme! Having Time in your land may be a bit awkward when trying to work it all out game mechanic's wise.

Your chumhandle is [COLOR=”#B22222”]mechanicallyPassionate[/COLOR] and you [COLOR=”#B22222”]are easily excitable by topics that excite you!!! you know?![/COLOR]

TLDR; Name: Anna Wallace Age: 13 Guardian: Dad Strife Specibus: Wrenchkind Modus: Toolbox Title: Thief of Time Land: Land of Tides and Time Chumhandle: mechanicallyPassionate

((OOC: Ok heres a WIP of another fankid I’m making, her name is Anna and she’s Adam’s ectosibling (if I end up making a session for them that is.) A toolbox modus is exactly what it sounds like, it can hold a variety of different objects but like the puzzle modus, it has the danger of overflowing.))

Hm, I would suggest giving her guardian a different name as not to get confused with the canon Dad. Maybe try a diffrent word and maybe call him Pop or something?

Overall you're at a very good start and you really just need to elaborate or let her personality shine through more in the bio. You can also elaborate on her relationship with Adam if he is her ecto sibling and other Pesterchum shenanigans. Anna seems like she's a very cute quirky girl so far, so keep up the good work and I hope to see this finished at sometime.