where is Eastern Suns going? was there a canon i missed? TT_TT ahh so ambiguoussss imma cry... but it's amazing compared to your previous works, you really nailed the aesthetics and theme on the spot! and it's smooth af to read, (you feel me?) no awkward stops or bland fragments, if the whole thing was posted in one go, i'd probably finish it within a day :) but serious question, did you actually have a canon in mind when you wrote Eastern Suns?
You missed nothing, darling. I wasn’t as focused on characters and plot this time because atmosphere was what I was going for. This story was really, really experimental and I’m overall pretty happy with how it turned out! I do think there are a lot of kinks I would work out if I could go back and edit it, but I think I’ll leave it the way it is.
By canon do you mean a plot? I had vague ideas, but this shit sort of wrote itself. Which is why you’ll see plot holes and redundancies, but I feel like that’s a trademark of mine by now so idgaf lol.