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Does Mc get to spend more time with their siblings, in the new rewrite?
That was my plan at first but it's hard to fit that in a way that still keeps the prologue's pace. I ended up going back to edit the rewrite and the chapters another time (which is why I've stayed offline sorry I am slow!) and I thought flashbacks would serve that purpose to help connect readers with MC's siblings. :]
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Welcome back Mae! I still adore this story and the whole concept. I hope the rewrite hasn't been too taxing. I'm excited tho.. hopefully I'll experience less rage during the new demo 👀🙈
Thank you! The rewrite was quite fun actually. I'm in the editing stages and I'm really happy with how it's turning out! And yes you will I promise. Or at least hopefully!
So glad to see that you're back!!
thank you, so glad to be back! i've been working work on the rewrite silently so for me it feels like I never left! hopefully everyone likes the changes I've made! I've taken what everyone said into consideration and I think the story I've rewritten is much better for it!!
Honestly, I'm so glad the characters will soften their approach if nothing else toward MC because the whole time they were being dicks, I was like "Cool, now I am sinking this whole ship with all of us in it! 👍 Fuck you." Like, "The Lion, The Witch, And The Audacity Of This Bitch", you know?
Do they not have something like "You catch more flies with honey than with vinegar" at where they live or something, for the love of God? SMH.
I laughed at this hahah I think my preference for stories in which they all slowly warm up to each other colored my view on the cast. There will be BIG changes but I hope people like them anyway :)
Hi Mae.. I read your response to someone in the comments and my dumbass.. took it completely wrong. You mentioned you were doing a rewrite because of all the hostility and aggression. And I was like why would people be aggressive towards a demo??!!... like a dumbass yeah lol
After reading it and seething and ranting to my husband about how you are such a good writer because I've never been more pissed in my life at a bunch of characters in my life and how my poor MC has such a hard life already and how his poor baby brother is probably distraught. I realized... oooooh you meant the characters 🤦🏻♀️
In my anger I managed to lose the fact that my anger was the answer for your rewrite. Lmao I just thought you wanted me to hate everyone! You honestly had me wanting to throw my phone because of the audacity. I was trying to imagine how the hell I was supposed to find a LI in the bunch of assholes I encountered. The only decent person was the damn healer. Honestly sorry. I don't mean any of this as criticism. I loved the demo. I couldn't wait for more. I honestly just thought you put so much emotion in the writing that the characters really just were convincing villains. You are a phenomenal writer.
I can see why you would want to rewrite that tho.. seeing as well we have to actually connect with these people to the point of wanting to help them/ care alil or even romance them and they all made that incredibly difficult to even like them 🤣
That's the biggest change! They were supposed to come off as untrustworthy and off-putting but everyone assumed they were villains!!!!! 🤣 It will be much different in the rewrite. Being mean to MC when you're asking them to give up their life to help you does make them come off as bumbling idiots.
This is very sweet, anyhow. I'm glad you liked it anyway and I'm flattered you like my writing!
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Hi, are you alright? It's been a while — the demo intro post hit 1k notes recently!! Let out an audible gasp when I saw it. Wherever you are now, I hope you're doing good. 🤺🩵
I'm still here! I've actually been working on a rewrite. I read the demo back and sort of hated how hostile everyone was and realized it could be so much better. AH. IT'S STILL A THING THAT'S HAPPENING.
'???' Trying to kill us
???: *has a blade to MCs neck* "Any last words?"
MC: "I love you."
???: "....What"
MC: "What"
We have no relation at all to S? Now I'm tempted to date them instead
Dating your alternate universe twin would be very funny.
