I am in love with the fic so much ughhh I can’t describe it!!!! IT’S SO GOOD!
I feel like one of the main reasons I love it is the way it’s written. It makes it feel more…impactful? More emotion I guess. Or makes the emotions Peri feels easier to understand. I can’t describe it well but it’s very good. Your writing is very good. That with the names of the chapters being silly while the fic is pure angst it great. It kinda makes me wanna read more angst that’s long and emotional.
keep up the good work bro the fic is so good ahhhhhh!!!!!!
I’m so greatful people enjoy my writing.
I honestly wasn’t sure if anyone would bc there wasn’t much angst in the fandom, but also I thought people might because there wasn’t enough angst in the fandom, ya know?
But also because I have a bit of a unique writing style. I write in a way that feels right for me.
No rules.
I allow myself to format the way I want, and word things the way I want without worrying about what I’m “supposed to do”
I write like poetry in a way, it’s fun and allows me to express myself more. I focus on what I want to focus on. If something feels boring to write, It’s probably boring to read, so I rather leave it out or write it from a different angle.
I think I’ve said this before in an AO3 comment reply, but I think a lot of my writing style has to do with the fact that I have ADHD. I struggle with focus a lot unless it’s something I’m really interested in, but even then I get distracted and procrastinate. I’ve learned a few tricks around this that helps, and it affects my writing style a lot.
-I have more spaces between lines so it doesn’t look too overwhelming.
-“if something is boring to write, it is boring to read” thinking
-focus on the good parts
-Always keep in mind what your readers came here for.
-keep things snappy and to the point (don’t go overboard with describing unimportant details)
In a way, I guess you could say I’ve created an “ADHD friendly work” idk if that’s already a thing, if it is, I haven’t seen it and want to see it.
I kind of wish there was more works that were like mine. I struggle a lot with reading books. I only really read fanfics because those are the only things that can keep my interest without me zoning out or getting frustrated that I couldn’t process what I just read or I get lost in meaningless words.
I guess I really just write what I want to read. I hope I can inspire others so that I can also read what I want to read.
We need more ADHD friendly works, and I’m happy to fill that role a little.










