I'm kind of nervous to ask this but you're one of the best writers I follow so, if it isn't too much to ask, I'm currently writing the first chapter to a story I wrote.
For a little context about it, it's like if Resident Evil, TLOU, The Walking Dead had a baby. Kind of. It's more TWD than RE and TLOU but you'll see what I mean in the description chapter.
If you could possibly spare a few moments to read over it and give advice, I'd really appreciate it. I'm also new to posting on Tumblr, I just came from a very long hiatus on Wattpad so advice there would be helpful. You totally don't have to, but it'd help me out. ๐
Hey, hon :)!๐ค I think you did terrific! The characters sound pretty damn badass and youโve done a good job introducing them and the atmosphere of your story๐๐ the only advice I could offer, which isnโt a big deal either tbh, is to perhaps end the chapter less abruptly. And even with that being said, I thought you did a wonderful job!๐
