#4starrating

Type: Chaptered

Length: 5 Chapters

Completion: Completed ~(15/08/17)

Pairing: Krisyeol

Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1263251/come-out-and-play-exo-chanyeol-kris-krisyeol-junmyeon-krisho-mafiaau

Author: KimJiByung (please give the author lots of love!!!)

Plot: Officer Park Chanyeol bites off more than he can chew when he tries to scope out the new mob that’s causing terror in the city of Seoul. A mafia that came from China, creating new dealings and new chaos for the officials.

What he doesn’t plan on is making a deal with the man to spare his life, his sister’s life, and everyone he holds dear.

The Dragon King makes him an offer he can’t refuse.

~KimJiByung

MY REVIEW

I. Love. This. Fanfiction. Honestly I’ve never been a fan of Krisyeol as I’m a diehard Chanbaek fan so at first I was expecting be very entertained by the fanfic however I have been proven completely wrong! I actually found myself quite interested in this ship by the end which was really cool. I enjoyed the plot so much and honestly I didn’t want it to end! I only have a bit of criticism though. The chapters could’ve been divided up a bit more instead of being in 5 massively long chapters. Also, the thing that has been non stop itching at me since I finished it around an hour ago. Spoiler alert ahead so if you are planning on reading this fanfic for yourself I suggest not continuing to read my review. Anyways to what’s been annoying me. WHY. Why did the author have to end the fanfiction in such a way!?!? I was reading the last chapter and after about halfway through my heart could no longer take it and I just couldn’t continue. Honestly, I hated the whole three-way relationship going on between Kris, Chanyeol and Junmyeon. I really hated it as I have a massive thing when it comes to these situations as I feel that when you are in a relationship with a person you should be wholly dedicated to that person. And I feel like the whole concept of “sharing” made it seem like Kris really didn’t care about Chanyeol at all even though we, as the reader, know he does. I feel like adding Junmyeon into the equation was really unnecessary and would’ve been much better if the author kept the relationship strictly between Chanyeol and Kris. Like for example maybe when it came to Kris interrogating Junmyeon about his love for Chanyeol if perhaps Kris became protective over Chanyeol and, in a cold yet friendly way, explained to Junmyeon that he wouldn’t give him up to someone that easily. And then from there made the book a little bit longer as I feel the storyline would’ve allowed the book to go on. For example maybe perhaps having a situation where Kris has a run-in with a rival mafia group where Chanyeol is put in life threatening danger where Kris then has to try and save him. These were just my ideas on what could’ve made the book that little bit better, however, the book was still enjoyable and I really loved it. I might think about reading this again in the future.