Nov 14, 2022
15 Minute City Workshop
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15 Minute City Workshop
Anya is live and ready to show you everything. Watch her strip, dance, and perform exclusive shows just for you. Interact in real-time and make your fantasies come true.
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Final presentation slidesÂ
I mainly tried to focus on the legibility of my brand when I was working on the logo and the additional assets I wanted to include in the presentation. I think it looks more professional and considered now.
The maps that inspired me and gave me a more structural understanding of how I should build my map. They are all vivid and interesting to explore, they give the city character and make the viewer believe that it will be a short and exciting journey to the destination.
- Illustration for Pépites Club Festival by Antoine Corbineau, 2017 https://antoinecorbineau.com/illustration/pepites-club-festival/
- The High Line by Jordan Sondler https://jordansondler.com/maps
- PR13 by Jaune Sardine https://www.jaune-sardine.fr/project/pr13-carte/
Map Development
I finalised my previous map, taking into account all the feedback I received on my previous design. I added movement to it by handwriting the names of buildings, streets and lakes. I simplified the landmarks to make my map look cleaner and easier to access.
Branding research
Fully Visualised: Branding Stories
This book helped me to understand what needs to be shown and said in my presentation.
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15 minute city presentation crit
Notes:
- work on legibility
- set clearer parameters for the logo
- the blue marker connects the letters f and e, see how this can be fixed
- make the bottom line go around the logo, it will give it more movement and liveliness
- sometimes only one colour can be used as a logo background
- consider creating a journey by naming the frames, e.g., Frame A, Frame B, etc.
- play with the shapes of the letters on the map, add movement.
- study the maps more, on my map it is not clear where the streets are
- The landmarks are too complicated
- add more contrast to the map by creating rigid shapes and dull colours and then adding icons to the map
- work on the legibility of my poster; try "artwork around the corner" because the "frame" will confuse those who know nothing about my project.
This critique was very useful as it pointed out the areas that need development and gave me a clearer idea of how I can take my branding further. Â
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Guiding poster
This is an example of a poster that will direct people to the nearest frame.