It's me again! The one from yesterday (or today? I have no idea xD).
I was actually a bit drastic, yeah, there is some character development in CS, but in many cases, it's not really noticeable in terms of interactions/relationships, too bad. Also, it seems to me that they "neglected" many characters (yes, I'm still mad about the absence of Kariya and Hikaru from the ultimate 11. Those two had the potential to be among the 11... not... what is the dinosaur guy called in Japanese?) and rushed a bit on the ending (that drastic change of antagonist threw me off the first time). But I understand that with the limited number of episodes, you can't do everything 100%. Luckily, there are fics that allow us to resolve/deepen what we feel is necessary! (Like how in CS Fei/Tenma "ignore" that they basically killed a version of Yuichi. I love that you gave weight to the events with Hakuryuu. I can't wait to see him again and see how Fei and Kyousuke react).
Are you interested, really? 🥺 In truth, that WIP is nothing special. A simple CodeLyoko!Au (IE and Code Lyoko were my childhood) post Galaxy with Fei randomly returning to the past.
In the first version, Fei's past was much less considered. Yes, I did reference it every now and then, but only with the second version, after growing up and reading SIYH, I began to consider it something "worth" exploring in terms of its psychological impact (he returned to the past because of an argument with Saryuu, he struggled to adapt to his new daily life and his past in Feida and his actions were something that weighed him down more than in the first version).
Furthermore, your fic, and other time travel fics, had inspired me to fantasize (while I was bored at work without clients) about a story in which Fei, as a child, had ended up in the past and grown up at Ohisama En with the others, but then joined Raimon during the events of IE2 (a very short and simple version). I don't know how I came up with this idea from SIYH, but I know that in terms of attention to psychological characterization, I owe a lot to your story.
Thanks for listening/reading! Honestly, I've been missing these WIPS a bit, so it was nice to be able to tell someone about them.
Never been a Hikaru fan myself (kinda neutral), but I get what you mean. He's a character with a lot going for himself, but the story doesn't really make use of it. It is a shame. As for Kariya, I believe my feelings on this are rather known.
Yeah, the antagonist switch. I rant about this particular topic a lot, and ya bet I will again. Like now. The idea isn't bad, the execution is poor. We have little reason to give a darn about El Dorado after all they've done, and given the ratings it's kinda impossible to show Feida as the threat they absolutely are outside of some implications. And that one time SARU tried to get Fei to kill Tenma. Which is a thing that happened. Really, though, it's just not enough this late in the season to take that antagonist role from El Dorado - at best they're both bad.
Yeaaa... In big part what got them is the fact that they did not expect it at all - they got comfortable with Hakuryuu there. It's especially bad for Fei, who I constantly depict as struggling to really... get close to others in fear of them leaving. Which is exactly what happened with Hakuryuu. I don't think he would have been as distant with others (Tsurugi excluded obviously) if not for that. Tsurugi meanwhile watched his friend just fucking die in front of him. Like, I think in both cases it would have messed them up at least a bit (Tsurugi significantly more), but neither really had the opportunity to detach themselves for protection.
Oh, I can't wait for Hakuryuu, either. Love the guy in general. And alt!Hakuryuu's extremely important, still, regarding Fei and Kyousuke's relationship. Genuinely can't wait for this part especially. <3
I know jack about Code Lyoko, but go on.
Oh, yeah, love them struggling with this kind of stuff. Also I get that, we do sometimes need to grow up a bit to handle the kind of story we want to tell. It's the same for me with SIYH or that Magi stuff which is not relevant to the discussion but usually my best example, bc I outlined a lot in '21 but didn't write till '23 and needless to say, the outline is super outdated & I love the current version way more. Anyway.
Lmao, SIYH came to be bc I saw some fanarts of Tsurugi/Fei, and in the second part (the Galaxy one), one of the major plotlines was inspired by a calendar pic with winter Ozrock and Tsurugi near each other and a fanart of it. The plotline has nothing to do with this pic, besides Tsurugi&Ozrock interacting (a lot). And now I have so much Ixal and Ozrock lore I just can't wait to share. Inspiration can come so randomly, haha.
I'm still amazed that I managed to inspire you in that way <3 It does mean quite a lot to me, really. Definitely makes the years I spent writing and planning it out worth it.
Also huge mood. Just rambling about stuff here makes me wanna go back to writing. Ghhhh, Chapter 30 is actually just missing the last part... </3
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