Under a Clear Sky, In a World Untarnished,

I wrote a fic, and I'm almost finished and I hope to upload it soon. It's pretty long, and I've been working on it for over two years. I love it, it's one of my babies.

Now, as you might guess, comments are incredibly precious to me. I've written other stories, and there are comments that are several years old that I still go back to. Sometimes because I need inspiration, sometimes just because I need some positivity in my life. I'm so incredibly thankful for every single one.

The thing is, with my new fic, I feel like it would be better to post it in a couple, maybe three or four, pretty long chapters, so in big chunks. It feels better to me. But on the other hand, I'm pretty sure people react only once a chapter. And I think I'll find out more about what they think about specific parts if I split the chapters up. Also, if it's just finished within a couple weeks, no one is going to read it after that.

It kinda feels wrong to only do that for the comments, but on the other hand, there's so much work in it. I've been working on it for years, and I feel like I want it to be seen as much as possible. I don't know if there's a (ethical) right answer, I was just curious about your thoughts, I guess.

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You have no way of knowing this, anon, but I write adult education courses for a living and I've recently been working on one related to Ethics as a practical skill and regulatory requirement.

So I looked through your stated issue here, and I ran it through the ethical decision-making framework that is the basis for the course I've been writing, and you're actually fine.

The reason why I say that is because no matter which choice you provide, you are still giving your readers the story in its entirety. You are not tricking or fooling them into clicking something that will steal their data or their money. You are not feeding them the first three chapters and holding the fourth one hostage until you receive enough comments to release it.

All you are suggesting doing is separating the story into more chapters than you, as the author, think it actually needs. That's your prerogative as the author. Part of your job is determining chapter breaks, and how you make that determination is entirely up to you.

People who prefer longer chapters can read your work in Entire Work mode. People who prefer shorter chapters have a better chance of reading it at all. (I say this as someone who has had an 85K oneshot in my Marked for Later for 6 years now and has never actually opened it because ohmygodthat'ssolong)

1) walkable cities

2) more eco-friendly everything

3) your boss couldn't force you to work weekends

4) teachers would get some fucking respect

5) restorative, rather than punitive, justice system

6) heavy-duty social safety net

7) emphasis on community

8) the abortion argument wouldn't be an argument because abortion isn't some fraught tangled issue in Judaism--it's a matter of health to be determined between a pregnant person, their doctor, and their rabbi, and the rabbi's role is basically to provide moral support

9) vaccines wouldn't be an argument. You're getting them because the science shows they protect people and we respect science and learning in this world. You're getting them because it's not all about you-you-you in this world. You have a duty to your community and that includes the preservation of life and health.

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