sadclownbye

I've tried my best to ignore it. I didn't want to make a big deal out of it since, you know, it's romance fiction between two colorful blobs from an adult swim cartoon.

Things I noticed -

- The characters don't sound like themselves. Granted, ofc they're gonna sound ooc in fanfiction but they both sound like robots. Their personalities were nowhere to be found.

I'm tired of seeing Charlie having lame reactions when he gets teased. "Ugh, slander!" *grabs heart dramatically.*

It sucks to see Pim go into therapist mode every time something bad happens.

- Overly detailed

- Listing things in thirds.

- "Jesus Christ."

- "It's not x, it's y."

When I go to the comments on ao3, I see comments like "Oh that was amazing" or "so good, keep writing!" I feel like I'm going crazy??